You're pretty much a goddess. These are great.

Sofia,
I am so sorry that I haven't had a chance to read this story before now: work, RL and a little family holiday conspired against me!

What can I say? I'll make a B/A shipper out of you yet! LOL

That said...I really liked this story. I think mostly what I like is the way you write. Your prose is at once lyrical and sharp, a nice juxtaposition of styles used to great effect.

In this piece you've created a vivid picture of tortured Angel, complicated Spike and the woman who loves them both. Despite my, well, you know, inner B/A **, I don't think I can argue with the fact that Buffy *does* love both her vampires, certainly not the way you write them.

Well done, sweetie!
Chrislee

Okay, beautiful. It was very risque and wonderful. I loved the line: "The angels in her bed are of the fallen kind." It was very poetic. I hope this isn't the last chapter.

I like. Good ideas and nice imagery. But why the G rating? I think it should be higher.