I really enjoyed your story. I just wish that it could be more than a oneshot although it's setup to be one. xP It was surprising that you could make Gaz have such feelings without taking her out of character. The bond between Dib and Gaz is so aptly looked into. It's truly on the mark. :3

Amazing. Simply amazing. I know the description placed this as a drama, but it caught me off guard nonetheless. This is the kind of writing I want to be capable of. The emotions evoked by reading this. I could actually feel the sadness and loneliness. Very powerful stuff.

Wow, this was really deep and cool and poetic and stuff! I like dis! Dis be da coolness of da ham!1!1!one!11!! ^_^ ::dances with Gaz::

Hmm, kinda weird, kinda angsty, an' I like angsty. Pretty good.

I like it. Dib why don't you give your sister a little affection?