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| Allison 2003-07-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseI have read all three chapters, and I think that the second chapter was weaker than the other two, but still pretty good. Certain lines in the chapters are clever, and I enjoyed them immensely and I look foward to many more. Keep Writing! |
| Ely 2003-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the best post-Telling fic I've read so far! Please continue!! |
| jcal4evr 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot that you won't pick up a pen ever again, more like crying and praying that when you do, you make the wife go away. ;) Anyway, very nice fic, update soon! :) |
| twin*muse 2003-06-21 ch 1, | abuseokay first of all I want to thank you for making my wildest dreams come true. My name is Nicole. THANX!! Next, I just hope THIS Nicole in your story is nice and not a jealous type. An understanding type and not selfish. Cause if I were REALLY in her shoes and sydney came back?...In all honesty, cause my momma raised me right, I'd let him go and send him back to Sydney, no questions asked. Just be thankful for the time we had and wish them luck. MAYBE ask to have a kid named after me or something Nicolas Vaughn has a ring to it. So does Emily Nicole, or Shelby Nicole (which I like to pretend would be there little girls name if they ever had one, always loved the name Shelby and why not Nicole too??) Okay, enough babbling, on with the show I say!! thanx! |
| AgentGilmore 2003-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG THAT IS MY FAVORITE SONG EVER! and it totally and completely screams syd and vaughn, i mean, purple hair...it was great |
| Linz 2003-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! You sound like you know Vaughn very well, you seem to have acurately gotten into his head. I admit, I *am* almost crying, but only because you caught the emotion so well that it made me sad all over again...sniff sniff...which for some strange, perverted way attracts me to fics. So, anyway, congratulations on your wonderful fic, and on figuring out how to keep the italics (I read your Alias Online CMS post, in case you were wondering...), and please write more! And it's unique, I promise. Well done! |
| WishingStar 2003-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseMake Vaughn and Syd Get Back Together! |
| Abbie 2003-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so good! I love how you got into so much detail! Good job and I hope you update soon! |
| Darrel Doomvomit 2003-06-21 ch 1, | abusei like your style. and the fic. hate jj. |