this was nice and sweet. the only thing i would suggest to improve it might be a lil more on how each of the was feeling and making a new papagraph everytime a new character speaks. otherwise very nice:)

EW WAT THE HEK SHAL AND EM R GAY?! U TOTALLY RUINED MUTANT X 4EVER! I THOT IT WAS EMMA AND SUMONE ELSE TILL I READ ALL OF IT! URGH..

That was awesome! I loved it!

Sweet fic. It's great!

love the story! I wanna see it develope into a marriage btween em and shal. keep up the great work!

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im sad this is only gonna b one chapter!! but this was a great story cant wait for some more of yer stories!!

i really like it you should make a sequel

Oh what fun. Well done, waiting for updates of your other fics!

This was definitely worth the read, just for the fact that Emma, and Shalimar left Brennan and Jesse at the club!

Thanks for the laugh.
Emma and Shal or so cute together.

hahaha hey darkie! great storie, had me laughing!! And yeah, it was long enough! **, I'm loving this challenge thing! lol! what a birthday!