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Reviews For: Our Little Birthday Girl

Magnus The Wolf
2005-09-09
ch 1,
abusethis was nice and sweet. the only thing i would suggest to improve it might be a lil more on how each of the was feeling and making a new papagraph everytime a new character speaks. otherwise very nice:)
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2004-11-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseEW WAT THE HEK SHAL AND EM R GAY?! U TOTALLY RUINED MUTANT X 4EVER! I THOT IT WAS EMMA AND SUMONE ELSE TILL I READ ALL OF IT! URGH..
I Forget
2003-07-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was awesome! I loved it!
Riv
2003-06-25
ch 1,
abuseSweet fic. It's great!
spidey2
2003-06-23
ch 1, anon.
abuselove the story! I wanna see it develope into a marriage btween em and shal. keep up the great work!

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rain
2003-06-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseim sad this is only gonna b one chapter!! but this was a great story cant wait for some more of yer stories!!
Frida
2003-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abusei really like it you should make a sequel
ferae natuarae
2003-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh what fun. Well done, waiting for updates of your other fics!
goldstranger
2003-06-20
ch 1,
abuseThis was definitely worth the read, just for the fact that Emma, and Shalimar left Brennan and Jesse at the club!

Thanks for the laugh.
Emma and Shal or so cute together.
ChEsTeRz
2003-06-20
ch 1,
abusehahaha hey darkie! great storie, had me laughing!! And yeah, it was long enough! **, I'm loving this challenge thing! lol! what a birthday!
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