Fun story. Quite engrossing. Pay attention to your proof readers' edits. I've seen a few instances of before/after still in there, like sitesight. I look forward to more. The polishing is really minor, and everyone knows it's only worth polishing things of beauty.

The animal channel says a number of the big cats in captivity and some wild ones mooching around can develop a real taste for even heavely cooked meats.

The house cats and dogs can be real bad about it. A friend has a dog that eats only hanburger and demands that it be cooked and seasoned with Mrs. Dash@ ^'^.

This one could be fun if you tied it in with one or two of your other story lines. Specially Lunacrocy. Loads of money and lots of land, both around tokyo and somewhere more primitive, would give a plenty of growth area for the cheeta clan and the plot lines.

Since you said you are might be having troubles with Dragon Bane: You have GOT to be a RPG gamer!

Grab a dugeonmaster to design a difficult quest;

You already have wizard/Dragon = Ranma
Cleric = Kasumi
Barbarian = Shampoo
Knight = Ukyo
and whoever else you think could create a hilarious, letherus good time teem.

Stick them in his louxourous Fourtrous of solitude with his hord and let them, between chasing and bedding him, think of ways to take care of the idiot NWC that have got to be, as usual, deciding that they have better ideas of how to use said hord of money and knowledge and the Kami given right to do so.

Come to think of it I think I have good dungeon maker program somewhere around here I can e-mail if your interested.

No, I can't write complete stories worth beans; dream up things that might make them more interesting without irritating you (much), maybe.

Enjoy


May the MUSE be with you!

I love this story. Please add more chapters.

Realy nice piece, thats now three peices good enough to get on my favorites list, which means you are now their as well. please keep up the good work.

Looks like a good story...Ranma's likely turned Nabiki into a Werecheetah...of course it depends on how deep those cuts were, doesn't it? As far as I know...it requires a minimum depth before the Lycanthropy takes hold...something along the lines of a centimeter or so.

Keep the chapters coming!

Great story.

Wish there was more!

I just hope that you will come back to this story eventually it has so much potential and it is very well done. Until next time keep up the good work.

Great story... some of the outer ranma references went a wee bit over my head, but... meh!

Looking forward to more!

Its been more than a year, and I hope -Fervrently- that you ARE going to be continueing this story, sooner rather than later if us readers are lucky. The same goes for your other story, Luacracy. I cant remember if i left a reveiw on that one...

Awesome!
Update ASAP!
And while your at it Update Fast Tracks!

Neat. Interesting plot. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Especially when the fathers get back or when the next full moon hits. Nabiki the whercat sounds inriguing.

interesting

This story has some potential, and I hope you continue it.

Innortal

A very good story so far. I hope that you will consider working on this one some time in the near future. Keep up the good work.