Add more, please! I wanna see where this goes! We need more Storm/Nightcrawler fluff.

this was good, I liked it. I don't think it needs another chapter, but it did end in a way that if you wanted to add more it would be allright to. still, i think it's good.

a few spelling mistakes but nothing terrible. the writing was great! it was so cute! keep writing!

wow, that was cool!
the only thing i think, is that he shouldn't have called her darling when she was awake. it's just kinda unlike kurt. (i'm over critical, i know. i can't help it!)
other than that, is was great!
i think it's best left as it is- as just a short, mind-tweeking story. (tweeking? O-o)

Aw. Thank you for a sweet little story.

very, very good, for a rookie

I like this, I truly do, and the only suggestion I can give you is to get a beta reader to go over your fic fixing any spelling errors for you. I'll do it if no-one else wishes to volunteer. . . I have this strange enthusiasm and pleasure in finding and correcting spelling mistakes. . . LOL! I'm weird, I know.

Very good story, especially since its your first. Just watch the grammer and spelling.

Hey! Good job! Very nice story, and I hope you keep writting Kurt's fictions! I really love it! :)
Congratulations!

For a first, this was pretty good. You have a talent, that's for sure. I couldn't find anything so major that it required immediate fixing...so I'd say very nice. As for Kurt, you did a wonderful job portraying him, but you might want to try and show his accent in future fics. I would leave it at this, and not add any more chapters. Other than that, it was very good and I hope to read more of your work in the near future ^_^

Sincerely,
~Dragonmistriss