*sniffles and wipes away tears* You made me even more sad... NOT FAIR! *cries again* I loved it, btw... And anytime you need a beta, you can ask me... _; *goes off to cry in peace*

Mako-chan

God I hate deathfics... They are just too sad. I really liked this one, but now I'm all sad... I have to go and cry now.

Mako-chan

That was good, however it was rushed and had quite a few typos, my advice to you would be to work slower...and to get a beta reader to check up on your work for you. You have a great style, all you need to do is develope it a little and you could be great.

By the way, you capture duo the best...keep working with his person. If you want to reply to this my e-mail is and my Screen name is silentdeathshado.

Again, keep working on your style and slow your writing down by giving more detail, good luck!

wow. This was so moving. You said that English wasn't your native language, but reading this I could hardly tell. I am a big fan of Duo, and let me tell you, this was one of the sweetest fics I have ever read about him. Usually all I see is pairings...this was a welcome relief, and a unique and wonderful story as well. Thank you so much for posting it so I - and others - could read it.

OMG! I LOVED it! GREAT job!