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| BudgetBuddy 2003-12-10 ch 6, | abuseExcellent story but it needs a sequel and really fast. Loved the Sydney/Vaughn sweetness so great. Pretty please write more really soon. PS Loved the 24.5 minutes later part. |
| Wibin ForNumen 2003-08-29 ch 6, anon. | abuseYes, MORE!! |
| JoAnn13 2003-08-18 ch 6, | abusei really like teh 24.5 mins later part...real smart..hey that rhymes!lol update sooner!;) |
| Kayla 2003-08-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseDuh, duh, duh! Lol, I like it alot!! |
| SunnE1 2003-08-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseAlright, so I just finished reading your other updated story, and I thought, 'well, I'm on a role, best to just keep going'. So agian, (I know I say this often, but I mean it everytime) well done. Very interesting plot developments. I must say that I am a little confussed... what with the triple agent and all, way to make a girl think. Keep it up, I really like the s/v. |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-13 ch 6, | abusei love it! great twist! keep it up :) |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-13 ch 5, | abusei love the shipperness... like how you avoid telling us what's really going on... lol. keep it up :) |
| Kat 2003-08-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseAH YOUR SO SNEAKY!! Its great! i really liked the line at the beginning about the kissing and experience etc. It was my favorite. But now, i'm gonna go read part 2! Hope it is as good! ~Kat |
| Speedy 2003-08-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseASH...I guess that explains the whole "cia" thing, too - and I thought it was just a pretty name. I just love it when Vaughn comes up with theories and acts all smart - especially when they usually have him asking a bunch of dumb questions on the show. Anyway - how you came up with this is beyond me, but I love it - on to part two! |
| Lara783 2003-08-12 ch 6, | abuseGeez, girl, where do you come up with this stuff?? You're so incredibly talented, I don't know whether to congratulate you or be incredibly envious. Hm, maybe a little combination of both. :D Oh, and a little something I noticed, and it may be my severely overworked brain coming into play, but here it is regardless. The name "Apollyon Soul Harvest"--did that come from the names of two of the Left Behind Books? If so, they're awesome books, so that would make sense, but if not, well, now you know. :D Anyway, I'm going to go read the first part of the sequel now, so I'll write more in a few minutes!! Thanks so much for writing!! |
| Kat 2003-08-12 ch 5, anon. | abusehehe...funny ending. i wanna no what happens! whast going on wiht all this sneakiness? i like it! and by the way, you need a title LOL ~Kat |
| Lara783 2003-08-11 ch 5, | abuseSo, you're awesome. :) I love this story! Please write more of it really soon, I'm really curious about what's going on with SD-6 and all!! Thanks for writing! |
| anonymousthinker 2003-08-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseJust adorable ... I'm a sucker for Sydney/Vaughn sweetness :) Update again soon please! |
| serendipity112233 2003-08-11 ch 5, | abusemore?! MORE?! HELL YES! I love this! OMG this story is so good! you hvae to continue for my well-being :-D |
| Speedy 2003-08-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhat I would give for those 26 minutes...sigh. Still awesome :) |