*wails* that was beautiful..bless their souls, Bryony and Veil

dude I don't know what Redwall is excatlly about but I know your poem is awesome!

*Sniffs then bursts into tears* NO! VEIL! He shouldn't of died!

This is a truly touching story. Yes I am a Veil fan.I also like Blaggut ang Plugg Firetail.

That was a sweet poem, very nice!

aww that was soo sad, really good though

Very nice poem, I mean, the best poem I have ever read in my life!

*sniff* So sad...it fits prefectly. I always loved Veil...

great job! so sad and sweet at the end. i like it. well written. i was gonna write something about bryony and veil also but never got to it. anyway, great job on this. keep on writing. and thanks for your review.

*sniff sniff* that was really sad and well done, it makes me want to read Outcast of Redwall again.

Woah... this is as sad as "Rose, my love forever.".

Oh oh! How wonderfully imaginative. Beautifully written.

Oh, I loved this... Well, with the exception of the "mean old fart" line. Funny as it was, it was a bit out-of-place in this mournful poem. But all in all, this was beautiful. Outcast of Redwall is one of my top 3 favorite Redwall books (next to Mariel and the Bellmaker) so this just furthers my love of it. I'm in the process of writing a fic you might enjoy, cause it involves Veil and a little twist of fate... Great job! I'm putting this in my faves!

Sable

That was was so pretty...*is curently in awe*

I was almost crying...really I was...until I read the line "He loathed you, the mean old fart." Then I couldn't help it...I burst out laughing...

Oh well. Great poem anyway.