Reviews for The Story of You and I

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Gabie : ) 2007-05-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseShows parts of Yoh and Hao's characters which are rarely looked upon. Adds depth to both of them, especially Hao, who can now be seen as a more dynamic character with a range of emotions. Also makes the reader hope for the "what if everything turns out alright & the two can live as brothers?" situation, a pleasant ending I would so like to see (especially because of the way you brought up the idea). Other than a few grammar mistakes (tenses, omitting words), a great story which I enjoyed reading. Thanks! ^_^
scrawling purple ink 2007-01-19 ch 1,	abuseOh my god. This is so beautifully written, everyhing in character, and I think you captured their characters perfectly. I love how you didn't alter h and kept him with the sort of simple wisdom he has, and Hao was just the right blend of determined and regretful. Faves.
Petitio Principii 2006-11-30 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful written and portrays the characters very nicely.
whee XD 2006-11-19 ch 1,	abuseThough I'm reviewing thi three to four years after you wrote this, I have to say that it's brilliant O_O It's...sweet, and sad, in a not-really way. The ending line was beautiful. favs
Yumeorb 2006-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThis fic wonderfully potrayed Hao and Yoh. The way you despict their interaction in their dialogue is very thoughtful. The brotherly love in this is showed with Hao's geniune feeling as a soul. It's also interesting to read how you thoughts behind the reason of them becoming twins.
ChaosAkita 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseAw! That was so good! Just about the only non-incestuous Hao&Yoh story I've every read.
shamenteen 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story!
A Dreamers Death- Dead Acco... 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abuseWow...your a really good writer you know. This is the second story I've read of yours and I've enjoyed them both, I even added them to my fave lists. I wish I good read the other fics too but those shows aren't shown here (cries, kicking evil tv for not showing them.) ...okay...em...I can't remember what else i was going to say so i'll end the review here. Great story...blab,blab,blab...you know the rest :D
Shale 101 2005-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw,that`s so cute^_^
Silver Fox Trot 2005-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThat was so beautiful! Tries to stop flow of tears It was very heart-touching!
ejqHorseLady 2005-05-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI must apolgise for my earlier review. I ment it for another fanfic I read. But somehow that fanfic ended up with the review I wrote for this fanfic and this fanfic ended up with what I wrote for the other fanfic. I am so terribly sorry. I'm also so sorry for how long it took for me to realize my mistake.
ejqHorseLady 2005-04-20 ch 1,	abuseThis is such an adorible fanfic. I love it.
The Only Living Parselmouth 2005-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI've already reviewed one of your storys but I wanted to review this one too, and as simply as I can put it, It was sweet but not too much fluff, I wish Hao could've changed his mind and joined Yoh but that is probably too much to ask for.
emikoxchan 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abusewow... How do you think of this stuff?! It's so good!
AnimeHorseLady 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abuseAww. This is such a cute fanfic. Very adorible. I hope you write something else along this line it is very cute.

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