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| Chibi Bishi 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusewow. this piece is amazing even tho its so short. its really haunting and lyrical. i absolutely adore your way of writing! plus i really like the kouji+izumi couple=D |
| Aestivate 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuse"Hittori demo heiki" Adorable. Especially since... I'm a kouzumi fangirl. It's beautiful and the prose is mysterious and oddly lyrical. Beautiful. |
| miikan 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abuseHi, well, I only wanted to say, I love your story! I really do! So, write more stuff about it, ok... |
| Stolen Kisses 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. I'm in awe. This is beautiful- I read it once then I had to read it again. It's an amazing- and I don't even particularly like any of the Frontier characters. But... Wow. |
| A Thousand Paper Cranes 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuseToo awed to speak. Yet another flawless piece from you, O Goddess of Fanfiction. |
| Sir Brass of the Pen 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuseVERY strange indeed for this to be coming from you, Karen-san. Kouzumi's are usually the fixation of obsessive kouji fangirls, and you're definately NOT one of those. Still, though it's strange in form and delivery, it's very well done, and very good anyway. I give it two thumbs up. :D ~James (Sir Brass of the Pen) |
| AznGurl 2003-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseUh... nice details but where's the plot? |
| andrea 2003-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseare the 'he and 'she izumi and kouji? but not in that order? |
| Three A.M. in the Morning 2003-06-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Really, amazing. I *think* I know who the three characters are, but I'm not quite sure about it. It's really simple, but the few words speak of 'great wisdom' - like 'less means more' and the anecdote at the end added some sort of . . . touch of another world. It's rather heart-breaking in an aspect. Somehow it's very heart breaking but I can't find what made it so much like that - just the whole atmosphere between the four moments. Purely moving and bittersweet. Love bittersweet, like the rain. (Minamoto and Orimoto? 'kaze no shizuku' ;) ) |
| Ivgie Sole 2003-06-22 ch 1, | abuseExtremely well written! I did not have a chance to watch Frontire, but still enjoyed your work a great deal. Great job!^^ |
| Dragons star 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is pretty good. But there wasn't much about this but sorrow, maybe this was your perspective on things. |
| Blue Eyes Toon Dragon 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Although I'm not much of a fan of Frontier, I know enough of it to know who these 3 people are. I especially like the somewhat haunting and lyrical prose in which this fic is being narrarated. |