Oh my. That was so sad. Poor Ryou, Malik, and Bakura. Beautiful story. Wonderful job.

OMG that was so sad
I love it

What a torrent of emotions in this story! It seemed so uncontrollable that I thought this was going to end badly, like some other death fics I've read, but you wrapped it up quite nicely. In fact, the ending was probably the best part of this fic. It was written wonderfully well.

Wow, that was so sad. ;_; That was wonderful, thank you.

you know i have one word for you. and that word is...

Wow.

TT: TT - TT I can't believe how sad this was! I actually started crying!

Kai: Very nice. CAn't wait to see your sequel! Btw, we're putting this under our Favorites 'cause I just love it so much! ^^

To begin with, why are you asking if I'm going to review? Maybe this could answer that, Yes...

Next>> Where's the disclaimer. You can't do fics w/o a disclaimer, someone might sue you later... And speaking of disclaimers, there's one more thing you have to disclaim other than YGO! Look at the line below:

“When you were born, everyone around you was happy…and you were the one who was crying. When I die, I’m going to be the one who is happy…and everyone around me will be crying…”

If I'm not mistaken, it came from Mitch Albom's 'Tuesdays with Morrie', tsk!tsk! I really think you should disclaim things first n.n That thing is copyrighted! What if they sue? Have you enough bucks?

Well, done with the disclaimer. now with your fic...

1) Bakura is totally OOC, as in out of character, yes...
2) You killed my poor litl Ryou! (Throws daggers at the author)
3) Nice layout of medium, though you need to learn more. I'm not against your technique but it's so typical... you can see those on ordinary fictions. Why not develop a so-called trademark? something that can identify you as the writer of a certain thing...

I won't be going far since this is your first fic that I have read... I'll go try your other fics to see if there's really something inside you to be awaken ^.~;

I think I believe your maxim: “Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop” (I think I should quote that in my fics too ^.^ With disclaimers of course!)

- Hunter K

It's so sad! T_T

I was crying! I really loved it though...somewhat inspritaional but it was so sad...

this story is so sweet.. it's sad that ryou dies, but it nice that he mad friends with malik! wa! IT'S SO SAD ! I LIKE RYOU!

Aww, that was so sad! It made me cry! And that's not an easy thing to do.

I believe the quote in question (the one Malik read from the book Ryou gave him) is actually:
'life is not measure by the number of breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away'
i know, cos it's one of my favourite quotes!!
btw, it's a great fic, really sad!

Aw...*cries*

That's so sad. I almost cried. Poor Ryou-chan. A sequel would be nice.

*sniffle* this is a beautiful story! i would be crying right now..but i forced myself not to..hehe...family in the house! i really...wow...im speechless! i must not have been in the right mood the first time..but now...i really am speechless! the whole idea is great. and i love all the quotes. and how to enemies can be brought together by the loss of a common friend. *sniffles* im sorri..i really...i dont think i can say anything to tell you how.. absolutely INCREDIBLE this story is! you should put this into contests...you'll win everytime! I *sniffles*...I am going to go to my room and cry now!! this is beautiful. i simply cant say that enough! the sequel will be fun to read!

::Starts to cry:: That was so sad! ::Cries even harder::
You killed Ryou-chan! Oh well. I'll get over it. That was great! ^^
::Hands some chocolate, Red merlot wine (I love this stuff) and handcuffs:: My favorite gift basket! Keep writing!