 unplugged32 2004-01-17 . chapter 1absolutely stunning! your writing is so powerful i am in awe:) |
 Banba McCuill 2003-09-08 . chapter 1Kahva!
It took me a while and a few re-reads to come up with a way to put my emotions and reaction into words, which is rare.
Written powerfully with flavorful passion and intensity.
A very moving and inspiring piece of work.
You were highly recommended by Ivy Tante, but I honestly had no idea the talent I would find…wow!
As for your disclaimer, I’ve blamed many a missed morning coffee and shot of CNN Headline News on those overly happy little children’s shows my kids seem to have worked into their short morning routine - bless ‘em! ;-)
An elven harem, eh? *Narrows eyes with jealousy and lust…wherever do I get one of those* ;-)
I hope you don't mind (though, come to think of it, would anyone ever really mind this type of compliment) if I add you to my favorites list.
May the Valar Smile Upon Your Every Word and Deed,
Banba Mccuill |
 Gamine 2003-07-26 . chapter 1Wow. Absolutely excellent. Far and away the best written of the POTR fics I've read. I hereby retire from writing.
OK, maybe not, but I'm certainly not going to tangle with you here. One again, you are the best. |
 AngelMouse5 2003-07-09 . chapter 1Wow. Each time i read this fic i love it more and more. it's terrific. i'm so glad you shared it with me before posting it here.
and yes, it is going up at the lair (already been coded and ready to go btw)
excellent work |
 Jess Angel 2003-06-30 . chapter 1That was well done. Very well done. I liked how you led everything up to the end. It left me with an encouraged spirit. Keep writing 0:o) |
 Thalia Weaver 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Absolutely gorgeous...quite staggeringly well-written. Am looking forward to more by you in the future.
~Thalia |
 Deepy 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Uh...wow. That was very nicely done. Great glimpse into Legolas' character. Even he isn't safe from the seduction of the Ring, that's good to know. I just love your style and the descriptions you provided is breathtaking. Wow, very nicely done. Write something else for LOTR, this catagory needs more talented writer like you. |
 Ivy Tante 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Hey, Sissy! Why didn't you let me know in advance about this one? The Elven harem didn't even breath a word about it! (You know, we're going to have to explain that one of these days... but not right now!)
Now that's said... wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I could almost see Legolas struggling, the bright eyes glinting with challenge as he defied the One Ring. I also like the part where he defined what and who he is, as if that alone were reason enough to resist the seduction of the Ring.
I think you should write one about all the companions. Boromir would be challenging, but I place great faith in you, Sis. Keep up the wonderful work! |
 Jade Daniels 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Very very interesting. ^_^ Good, solid, quality writing. A nice look into Legolas' mind, especially seeing how he resists certain temptations. I usually don't read LOTR fics, but this was a good one. Keep up the great work! ^_^ |
 Lhachel 2003-06-23 . chapter 1That's awesome! It's perfectly written to bring Legolas' feelings to the front. You have no unnecessary dialogue, and it's great. I think this is one of the best LotR pieces I've ever read. |
 French Pony 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Very nice. Short yet evocative. My favorite part is the end, where Legolas recites to himself who he is, who his companions are, and lists his real relationships against the Ring. It's not for nothing that the advice most often given to fantasy characters is "remember who you are." Knowing who you are can be a very powerful defensive weapon. |
 Lord Elrond's Bailiff 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Nice. Powerful ending. Not many people remember that the One Ring probably sought to seduce everyone ... including the Elven part of the fellowship.
Yes, all you Legolas-lusters out there ... Legolas was not perfect.
Thank you for a lovely piece. A beautiful departure from the usual Mary Sues smothering LotR-fanfiction on ff.net.
The Bailiff of Lord Elrond's Court
elronds_bailiff@hotmail.com |
 Leelee5 2003-06-23 . chapter 1Really, really good. Please keep writing, your style is unique. This is an original story, I never thought about Legolas and the Ring's effect on him. |
 Jen Littlebottom 2003-06-23 . chapter 1*claps* Bravo.
'You cling to me desperately as the most beguiling of lovers, yet pledge to ensure my freedom from everything, including yourself.'
Beautiful. |
 Killer Barbie 2003-06-23 . chapter 1I have only one word to describe this:
WOW. |