i thought it was good! it had a lot of passion!

its cute and creative!

That was a delightfully sweet story...thank you

*silver moon goddess

I loved your story!
My favorite part is when she says "Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not ok it's not the end." Great quote!
But seriously! This is an excellent story, and the title is catchy!

i LOVE this stoory!

Great story

awesome story!

I really liked your fic.
Is sweet, funny and full of love.

If you allow me I can translate it to spanish, and post it in in that language.
Congratulations from Buenos Aires, Argentina.
Muacks

I loved it it was so well written. The characters were so great and I liked that Serena was the colder one, usually its Darien who hides his feelings. Keep up the great work and i will be lookning forward to future works!

A well written story with perfectly crafted chemistry. Thanks for writing this story. Great work and keep it up.

-sigh-
I loved this story.
amazing. simply.
:D

i love the story!

cute story

AWESOME STORY!

I know you wrote this a long time ago but I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story...