This was so.. pretty.. I could actually hear Mel singing this in my mind!

(I could never write a song as good as this.. T_T)

bravo bravo i really like ur version of the song its so great

I really like your version, I could almost hear Melfina singing it in my head! Great job! It fits her slightly melancholy mood better.

I really enjoyed this. I always thought that the english song was a little bit... er... weird. Although I was never sure if it was the actual dub or the way the english Melfina sings it (which is painful). Anyway, I like your version a lot. And, I was thinking, I know it's *nice* to be faithful to the original lyrics, but in this case do you suppose it's strictly necessary? After all, they don't really mean much to the story line, do they? ^_^;; Maybe they do and I just never picked up on it. ...Anyway, very nice!

this was very good! i liked it alot! i love melfia's song... and i like this one as well! kudo's to you!
~mandy.chan