More! More! More, please!

Interesting...

i like this. i've never really read or writtin an S.K. fic, but i've read alot of his books. i like the way you write, it gives the fell of actually being present within the setting. are you planning on writing any more of this, or is it going to be or already abandoned? um... yeah. let me know either way.

usk

I can't understand why no one has commented on this. It's easily one of the best things I've seen in this section.

Kudos to you for writing a good, gritty crime drama. You have good description, wonderful use of the vernacular, good dialogue, and nice attention to detail. The kicking off of her shoes at the end particularly stuck out at me. Good touch.

I wish you'd write more. I'd like to read it.