 LillyJB 2005-08-29 . chapter 1I thought it was really good, but the part where Kramer was trying to plug up the holes in the basement was a little... cliche, and old. But otherwise I really liked it and the idea of Kramer's father being the Plumbing King was really funny! |
 TitansAddict 2003-10-30 . chapter 1I must say that this episode should indeed be played in the Seinfeld series. Your plot is perfect, the writing is impecable and the structure of the story is written just like the show.
Bravo my good friend, Bravo. |
 Father Hulk 2003-10-14 . chapter 1OMG this was so much like a real episode! and with your camera transition notes and all it was like i was watching tv rather than reading. And it was FUNNY too! Well done, my friend, you have created a fine work!
Fasha Hulk |
 Droidiac 2003-08-04 . chapter 1ahahahaha that was great! I couldnt stop reading it I love seinfeld and this would be a great episode! KEEP IT UP! |
 dtrain3 2003-08-03 . chapter 1Great story! So much like a real Seinfeld. But i have to take some points away for the plumbing prince idea. Seinfeld is based on things that are extremely belevible everyday occurences. I did like the scene where Kramer was trying to plug up the holes in the pipes though. |
 Prodigy 2003-06-30 . chapter 1Not bad, but could use some work. Keep it up! |
 Fox The Cave 2003-06-30 . chapter 1Really funny, keep up the good comedy writing! |