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| Athenais 2004-04-13 ch 4, | abuseFor the most part I don't like crossovers between Ranma and Sailormoon, but the last time I am stumple over one good one after the other or it is a new trend that there a popping up or maybe my likeness of something has changed. i don't know. yours seems to have much promise, but it really need a few updates and maybe a little rewrite of the first chapters with a few more explaing and describtion. but i really would love to see you to take up to write on this again |
| cecilia 2003-11-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseow this story looks good so now Ranma is not Serenity's Father but another? its clear that Ranma has something important to do in this story but if he is Serenity's father?... or not * sigh * please clarify, soon. from what it looks like Ranma was Serenity's Father in the Silver millennium in the other dimension, but in this one he is not. I need more info. please. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-21 ch 4, | abuseHehehe. Great chapter. It's a shame that Ryoga got caught up in all of this. I hope he wasn't too involved with Akane. Then again maybe he was ** at Ranma because he did get her! As you can tell I'm not fond of most of the versions of her including cannon. Update! |
| Dark Topaz 2003-10-17 ch 4, | abuseCan't wait to find out what is going on |
| Aleh 2003-10-13 ch 2, | abuseYou really need to check the formatting on your more recent posts; they're damned near unreadable due to character replacement. |
| lord anime 2003-10-11 ch 4, anon. | abusegreat job keep it up |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-19 ch 3, | abuseYour chapters are way too short. Good chapter otherwise. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-19 ch 2, | abuseHey, If it works use it. Solaris isn't bad. You could have gone in a different direction and used a derivative of day/equinox/star/sun, but Solaris works fine. I thought the uniform was a bit much but then kings and admirals always were decked out to the nines. I'd have a variety of uniforms available for his use tho' A nice working uniform would be useful rather then then the full dress uniform he has on now. |
| jchild 2003-07-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseokay this is shaping up to be very very very cool! keep it up ok? there are very few _decent_ crossovers out there! more soon pretty pretty please ^_~ catch ya jchild |
| maguswizard 2003-07-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think this chapter was very small and that in the sailor's continuity yo should put then after galaxia |
| Kalendra 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI know the idea just struck you but it's rather sad but still good. I could definately see some oportunity for a couple more chapters here. Keep it up :) |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-07-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good start. |
| Chibi Pyro Duo 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseomg please continue this i can't wait to read the rest. |