r u going to finish this story if not can i take it over

ok story

nice story

>I’m not 100 sure what to start with.

Okay, not your fault, I'm sure. FFN strips out some symbols. How to fix it? Spell out the word: percent. It's my personal policy to spell out numerals as words as well, since we speak in words, not symbols, but that's up to you.

Harry's marks are better than Ron's, and yet they both get the same amount of OWL's? I think the problem may lie in that you're counting Outstandings the same are you are EE's: one per. And what about Acceptables? Do they not get recognized? My suggestion would be one-half OWL per Acceptable, a full OWL per EE, and two per Outstanding. That would give Harry nine OWLs, Hermione twelve, and Ron five and a half - about right, in my opinion. (Of course if Harry got an Outstanding with honors in DADA, that would give him one more OWL, for a total of ten.)

>There were just too many of them to phantom.

Fathom. A phantom is a ghost, or ghostly figure.

I read your postscript here about Ron as captian because there was noone else. What about Katie Bell she was only one year ahead of them and on the team from her second year on. Way more experience than old Ronny boy.

Honestly, I`ve never liked Ron at all. And I especially don`t like him and Hermione together. I like Harry/Ginny, Harry/Hermione is cool, but I really like Remus/Hermione together. HELL, I`d rather her be paired with the Great Bouncing Ferret then Ron.

He`s jealous of Harry because he`s famous for something he doesn`t even remember doing. Harry doesn`t want to be famous, in fact, he hates it. He hates all the attention that he gets for it. He just wanted to be a normal teen.

But I do understand where Ron`s coming from. He`s got FIVE older brothers, and he can`t accomplish some of the other things his brothers did.

Like Bill was Head Boy, Charlie was a seeker for the Gryffindor Quidditch team and was the best since James Potter, until Harry came, Fred & George are accomplished pranksters, and Percy was Prefect AND Head boy(and a big fat GIT!), and Ron isn`t incredibly smart, or good looking, but he is a decent Keeper for the Gryffindor Quidditch team, and he`s good at Chess.

I`m not exactly defending him, but I kinda know where he`s coming from. I`ve got one older brother and one younger brother. My older brother is a science whiz, and my younger brother is a math whiz and a genius, but a total **! Me, I`m pretty good at English, and I like to write stories, and I was in gymnastics, but I suck at school.

this is really good. But how is it fininshed is Ron the traitor.

excelent story, but n0 continuation? why it is always like that with good stories.

TO MUCH BROWN NOSEING AND ** KISSING IN THE SPEECH

hm.

so... is this complete or what?! i love ti so much i hope you update! Harry is awsome but ron semmes off and everyones reactions to things are a little off like with harry suddenly having a tantrum then the nexy morning completly fime...

Sorry for the flame but i still love it!

hey i like it

Oh for the love of god UPDATE this story.

I could swear it's not a good idea to spell Voldemort wrong in your summary.
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