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| Kerjen 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseAsk and you receive! I just wrote a review to the story before this one. I like how you build this up slowly and how her sense of adventure is tweaked, Steed notices it, and it draws her into being his partner. |
| Stormcloud Empath 2003-12-31 ch 1, | abuseHm, I like this take on exactly what happened between Emma and Max Prendergast. Intriguing. |
| Frankie McStein 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, really good. I admit I was surprised by the HUGE ammount of space after the last line, but I guess that's just ff.net formatting going cukoo again =D I'd love to read more of these fics, Emma is my fav assisstant, Tara annoyes me and Cathy is a little to heavy in self asurence for me. |
| Alexis Rockford 2003-08-12 ch 1, | abuseAn unusual and interesting topic for a story, Very well-written as always, just a few minor points. 1. From the way Max talked in the episode, she detained him a lot longer that you showed. He says something like "Mein Lieb mein rose" was playing over and over when she betrayed him. 2. It ended far too abruptly and was too short. Other than that, enchanting. Prendergast was always my favourite diabolical mastermind and it was refreshing to read a story featuring him. |
| RaddMonz 2003-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother excellent Avengers story - thanks |
| esteed 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseYour stories are truly some of the best I have read. I loved your version of the Prendergast/Peel 'affair', and I hope that you will continue to write more stories, hopefully longer, in the future. :) |
| Cassandra Elise 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseAnother superb romp into the land of Avengers! I often wondered what happened between Emma and Prendergast. BTW, Prendergast has to be my favourite Avengers villain. I thought Mrs. Peel was being a little too ** Steed. Lines like "'So?' said Emma Peel very coldly. Her eyebrows raised at him dangerously," sound more like something her predecessor would say. Though, I suppose if I was on a holiday and a man I barely knew just appeared and practically demanded my help, I might be aggravated, too. :) And you can edit your stories after they are posted. All you do is correct whatever you want *off-line* in your word programme, and then go to the Edit Story/Add Chapters section of fanfiction.net. There will be a a box with the words, "Replace the text." Just upload your new, improved story in this section to replace your old one. |