Wah Poor Frodo...At least he has Sam though. Little Selfless Wonderful Sam

aw!

Aw.. that was cute. Sam does act kinda queer to Frodo in the movies though.

:'( Sad, but i loved! I REALLY LOVED IT!

This was really good! really!

I like, I like. Very descriptive and evocative- poor Frodo! Alas, hobbit!angst. Sam's such a sweetie pie, isn't he? :) One thing, though: there isn't a "God" in M-e, specifically, or a Hell. God is Eru or the Valar (if you don't know what I'm talking about, read the Silmarillion). I really like it, otherwise- you're v. talented :)

Very good. When are you posting the next chapter?

I also like the way you describe the struggle of Frodo. Very desccriptive