nice! i luv Saki! she's so adorable! keep it up!

Nice RE fanfic. I liked it when you made Leon slapped Claire...if you ask me she so totally deserved it. Great job, and keep continuing.

Damn it I thought you were dead.

THE FLESH OF FALLEN ANGELS!

THE FLESH OF FALLEN ANGELS!

Oh NO! This isn't looking to good for you. Know why? Well because you have Claire and Carlos kind of getting together and nobody is going to want to read something that. That's a stupid ** idea right there. What happen in the first chapter was pretty stupid. And there are no Claire/carlos fans at all.

You may be ** because of this. So don't be shocked if you don't get that many reviews at all.

Kekko omoshiroi hanashi da to omotte'ru, yo. Hayaku tsuzuite onegai! Saki he yoroshiku wo itte kudasai. Leon ga atashi no daisuki na kyarakutaa da kara, kanojou ha kare wo shinsetsu ni atsukatta hou ga ii! ;p Gambatte, ne...Ja, kono mama hanashi no tsuzuki wo imakaimaka to machiukete'ru, ne. :)

Hey, very interesting story. I like it. I'm not trying to be rude but in resident evil 2 Leon's hair is not blonde, it's like a brownish red. I'm not saying that to be mean but that is how it is on the game. Anyway good story!

continue the story

1. I thought Leon had light brown hair? I mean in the RE 4 trailer Leon's hair doesn't really look blonde it looks brown. And in the comic book Leon has dark brown hair.

2. Why have it where someone turns around when a bunch of guys outnumber you? I mean that seemed like a stupid scene.

3. Did you just kill Leon you **?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!