it's kinda crapy

a flying cow?!?!!? i think there might be something wrong with that.

ok - i like the idea of the flying cow...

but if you are please update

from w13

What...?

Heh, flying cows are WAY better than flying motorcycles. But why is Madame Pomfrey there...?

One must find this quite preposterous, in a sense of humanity. Though, I must congratulate you on your spelling, I must reluctantly explain to you that your dialogue in such a story; is some-what underrated. Meaning, it doesn't have the grater quality it should have, especially with your potential at writing. Thus, I will congratulate you on a fine piece of work, well done!

Now, a note of advice, when you do write your, rather humorous ‘Harry Potter’ book, like the gentleman who reviewed a while ago said, that maybe you should not start with the very beginning, yet start with Book 7, as book 6 has just come out, and I have already read that and so has many others.

A second note, I must include; when typing your story, try to make sure that when someone else starts to speak, or interrupt; make sure that you start a new paragraph for it.

Well Done

*raises an eyebrow* Okay... the flying cow? *shakes head to disperse disturbing mental images of Hagrid riding a cow* So what happens next? Is this an AU story, or a prologue to a story on Harry's sixth year or something? This could be the beginning of a very funny parody... *wink wink* E-mail me when you add a chapter, or if you want someone to beta read it before you post. Thank you for reviewing my story "The Cursed Valentine". Please read my other stuff too! I'd really appreciate your opinions on "From the Sidelines".
Later! ;)
~*~Lila Mae

Um... It's okay. I won't say the best i've seen so far but it's not bad.but would you mind writing the bk 6 or sumthin and not the beginning again? this is onli a suggestion so you can continue if u wan. aniway good luck and keep writing!