You seem to have received enough constructive criticism to whine and complain about without ever bothering to consider at all. You could use a change of pace. Besides, I'm not really sure how constructive I could be in this case, since one can't really TEACH someone a sense of humor. So I'm afraid I'll just have to instead note that this sad, pointless excursion into the world of not-funny fails. Miserably.

very good Very good loved all your stories...

A sequel? I'd love a sequel! Please write a sequel, man, I'm looking forward to it. He he he, Watoad and Wayoshi. Wonder what Wayoshi would look like? XD Oh, and what other character's can be cloned? (pointless thing coming up)

Mario - Wamario XD
Luigi - Waluigi o.O
Waluigi - Wawaluigi
Wario - Wawario
Wawaluigi - Wawawaluigi

Send in the clones. (sinister laugh) Um, yeah, er... (cough) I think it's good, still. Off t- you know the drill.

He he he. Mario is getting fat. Actually, he isn't: as long as Shigero Miyamoto (I think that's how his name is spelled) doesn't go mad, he'll always have the same tubby body-shape. XD What the heck, it's a fanfic. Wee! Off to chapter five!

He he he. Koopa Brand Whisky. I can imagine Bowser staggering around with a bottle of Koopa Brand Whisky: Cask Strength in his hand, er, claw. =D

Actually, it's just spelled Okay. Well, yeah, this is a fun fic. Off to chappy three!

Intriguing! Original idea and all that stuff. Off to read chappy two!

No! Digital Toad!

Digital Toad... It's a little lame actually, unoriginal kinda. I mean he's a Digital Toad, that's the best Toad could come up with? He should have named it something spunky, like DigiToad or ToadBot! XD Other than that, I like the story.

Excellent Robert, I'm glad your fanfic got posted after you showed it to me at school so long ago. Mooking forward to Digi-Toad 2!

You should continue!

You should continue!

You should continue!

You should continue!

You should continue!