NOo!! i just found a great story and it's discontinued sigh, oh well good job on the first 2 chapters. i know what you mean about losing motivation and stuff (mainly cause no one reviews :P) hope you will continue this some time in the future.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
Your story is amazing so far and Im dieing to read more so...PLEASE ADD MORE!

i love it hope there is more soon!1

WHAT WHY I OUTTA GET YOUR INTEREST BACK THIS STORY IS THE ONLY ONE TO CAPTURE MY ATTENTION HOW COULD YOU LOOSE YOU INTEREST

this was really good please up date soon

UPDATE SON
PLEASE
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Its been 5 YEARS please finish you are a great writer

Why oh why haven't you continued the story? Its been 4 years since it has been updated pls go and right chpter 3

i just hate rders who think we want to hear about there pesonale life realy shut up its nice to hear that people like to tell peole stuf that is real useless but shut up lol h.u.b.

This is a good story.Hope you continue it soon.

i agree with kage'brairs...

Damn **... please do excuse me for my langauge... but come on!! it was getting so damn good good so finish it or something... >.

NO! This story...IT MUST CONTINUE! Oh well...if you don't enjoy writing these, then I suppose that's your decision...T-T

I thought your story was awsome, and I want you to keep writing!

Very, very interesting so far! I really like it!

hey can i take over the story? i think i could do a good job