good story but one problem: Remus was bitten by Fenner Greybeck or however you spell his name

Hey, you should write more of this, if you get the chance. It's awesome!

Please?

Whoa...I love Lupin, and there aren't enough really good fics about him, but this has satisfied my craving. I also like all of the details you had about level 22; they're obviously not canon, but you included them in as though they were, and that confidence of writing makes readers more likely to find your story believable.

aw - poor Remus (*big hug cos I love him so much*) but even poorer Jacob! *gasp* how ill Remus react?

Oh...I love it! I really love it! You're doing quite a bit of foreshadowing there, and I can't wait for more