This reads like an actual Jack of All Trades episode.

I'd love to read more JoaT stories from you.

this is the first JOAJ's fan fiction i have ever ever read, and it was wonderful.bringing back to me all teh things i loved about the show.GOod job capturing the characters, their wit, and a wonderful dioalog.

EXCELLENT :D *claps* I can see the action in my mind and the dialogue is perfect

Wow! It's just like the real thing. I got so pissed at the WB for taking it off the air. I'm just glad people still write about it!

hey i loved it a lot keep writin'the fics : )

Good work. There are several places that's funny, or exciting, or both. I must say I absolutely loved "Monsieur Stiles, you consistently manage to lower my opinion of Americans day by day..." ]

If I were you, though, I think I'd skip the part about Jack wanting to quit as the Daring Dragoon. For me, it doesn't bring anything to the story. Just my thought.

Oh, brilliant! You've got the characters just right, and reading this was like watching a real episode. Thank you!

I love this story!

hehe I like it. Very well written. I hope you'll write more!

This story is great! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your stories...

Very very good. Best example of JOAT fic I've seen. Really awesome...please write more!

My God! This would make an excellent episode! You should submit this! This is too good for just fanfiction, I -loved- it!

Ahhh, how sweet...

You write fanfiction just as well as your original fics...that reminds me, I have to catch up on that. ;)

Awwwww, how sweet! Love it:)