Certainly creative. :)

I liked Harry and Severus's reaction to the memory!

this was great! totally not stupid mate! lovely writing
well done

That was great

first of all, It's not stupid! second of all, at least you tried to write something...so I don't think that you will be getting any flames from me any time soon.

Question: are you going to continue this? If you aren't, it's still a good one-shot...If you are, then maybe you can let some readers know...Just a thought.

Keep up the good work, and take care.

Merry Christmas!

FC

I dident tink thid was stupid, i tink it was grate.
Mabey you skud make a number 2?
It was god belive me

No it is not stupid I love it!! It will be itrsting to see were this story well go if you deside to continue it hope you will.

Wow! That was really good!

I love it!!

What a shock to me when I found out you had a name change. I have read you as both but never realized it was the same. This short story is good because it has different ideas about what had happened. Thanks for sharing.

this was a bit 'adorable'...
'eep', truth be told, but 'adorable' none-the-less!
at 2am, i cant get nothing but one-shots (got class in a couple of hours)
you do me good...
'adorable, i tell you, 'adorable'...
*mercuryacidandwater*

A very creative twist!! I liked it a lot.

actually its rather sweet

I liked it.

This fic isn't stupid, it's great!
^^
I happened to like it.
^^