  Bugged 10/28/02 . chapter 1 Why are you calling him Zion? His name is Shiine! Shiine! |
 Sakura Seta 5/19/01 . chapter 1Luv this one. _X |
| The C-dragon 5/18/01 . chapter 1 LUUUVVV ittt |
| Jack 5/15/01 . chapter 1 Very Good!
Write more Cha Cha. |
| Christina 5/12/01 . chapter 1 This was a pretty story. Could use more description, but it feels pretty initiated. |
| golden-flame4 5/5/01 . chapter 1 not bad! |
| Black Jade 5/4/01 . chapter 1 adding story to faves... |
| cleo 4/14/01 . chapter 1 Fantabulous. |
| Snowheart 3/26/01 . chapter 1 Nice! I like Dorothy's POV!_ |
| ThisAccountRetired42 1/22/01 . chapter 1 *grins widely*
I'd never liked fics that were told exclusively from the first person perspective, but this one made me change my mind. 3$hka did an excellent job of crafting and invoking emotion. See how easy it was to emphatize with the person talking? I'm eagerly looking forward for your next fics! |
| waterangel 12/26/00 . chapter 1 love it! |
| Aoife Malfoy 12/22/00 . chapter 1 Cool! i luv the line "For some reason, I trust the person I hate."! |
| kei12 12/16/00 . chapter 1 Really nice! |
| chu-chan 12/14/00 . chapter 1 cool |
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