great chapter! luv the journal entries :D

great chapter! i was laughing so hard. i told my friend and she was laughing a bit too. she doesnt read hp but she thought it was funny. anyway, great chapter! :D

great chapter! :D

great chapter

amazing first chapter! can't wait to continue! :D

Some good funny moments in there :)
thanks for the story

poor james..what are writer's blocks?

that was bloody amazing

im well aware that this story has been updated in several years and you might not even see this, but i cant go on to the next chapter without letting you know that this was possibly the best ending to a chapter ive seen on this sight :)

I want you to know that this is the best fan fiction I have ever read. You are very talented! You know how to leave an audience feeling affected by what they have read and experienced.
: )

I love the way you took that one line from a book and spun it out into a complete story. Great plot, character development, all that BS. Well done indeed.

That was...cute..


Pricky? Subject?

Ye gods, this is hilarious.

they are so cute! :3

REALLY nice ;)

hahahaha!! ;)