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Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 7
Yeah...once again, it's a good thing there's gonna be a sequel. I don't think I could take the suspense if there wasn't.
Wonderfully done, as always. You're amazing, and I love every word you write.
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 6
Very funny. I adore your sense of humor, and I don't care how often I have to say it!
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 5
Very well written. You have a knack for turning just the right phrases at just the right times, and I'm even more hooked on this story than I already was.
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 4
You have astounded me with your skill yet again. How do you come up with these things?
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 3
Wonderful chapter! You never cease to amaze me with your eloquence and imagination.
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 2
I love your sense of humor. You crack jokes at just the right moments, making this an even better fic than it already was.
Venus Smurf 3/23/04 . chapter 1
Once again, nice take on the characters. This is going to be as wonderful as your other stories!
Shadows of the Dead 1/26/04 . chapter 7
wow.
that was extremely well-written! lots of descriptions again, along w/ nice plot. longer, too_. (btw, this is again irina, incase u havent guessed) now, i definitely sense Realization in there, but thats cool, i luv Aurora Eos Rose's works too(so talented...-starry eyes-) thanks 2 u, im beginning 2 lyk minako more(lyked her b4, but ami-chan's gonna b my fav always). i kno i said i dont lyk gang stories, being 2 traumatized by IY, but this one u've written's really good! just one question: you enjoy tormenting ur favorite characters, dont u? a nice change from the "happily ever after"s, altho sometimes one do like a happy ending... the 3rd part will have one of those, rite?(going 2 read that anyways). btw, is the title suppose 2 b "recarnation" instead of "reincarnation"?
once again, great work, going now on2 the other ones!_ altho that might take a while... please dont show ppl my pic! gah... hate blackmail...(but i was going 2 read ur stories anyways...-) bibi!
kelly 10/1/03 . chapter 7
WRITE THE 3RD PART! I'M BEGGING YOU!...*crying*...please?
BJ 8/26/03 . chapter 7
Wonderfull job! I Love this Story

One Idea you might consider is a Story where the girls are apart of a all female pirate crew. you know as captains and the guys are of the Navy as captains. It might be an interesting story. But I'm sure what ever you write will be as good as the first two!
Triad Card 844A 7/13/03 . chapter 7
Hmm . . . I liked this better than the previous one. Good job!

This story certainly has a good plot, and it ties in pretty well with the previous story. The characters are cool, despite not exactly what I'd expect from them, but . . . oh well.

The ending seems rushed, though. It might have made more sense had it gone on a bit longer, but it's not bad.

It'll be interesting if the next part of the story happened during the Civil War. You've got a very good event that ties in well with the pattern going on in the story.

Looking forward to the third story!
love-kittie 6/26/03 . chapter 7
Your stories are great. I really think you should keep it up. I think for your next one should either be north and south or wwII.
Aphrodite2 6/25/03 . chapter 7
Wow that was really good... amazing really! You did a wonderful job... I can't wait to read more of these.

I would do some thing in between WWII and this story, thats a lot of time to cover. Maybe somewhere in a small town or farm, something different then this completely, and in another location, move them around alot that would be cool. You could put them in America in NYC and have them in different groups... its all up to you! You are wonderful!

Happy Writing!
Sidekickwannabe 6/25/03 . chapter 1
Interesting idea. However, a couple problems. A lady in the year 1721 would *not* be able to conceal a tank top and jeans under her clothing for the pure fact that they weren't invented in 1721 - Levi's didn't come out until the gold rush of the west some hundred plus years later. My thinking would be that she would have some men's clothing stashed away. Secondly, the names. Even with the codenames you provided I'm having to assume that Adriadne is Mina but I can't be one to guess the rest. It's too confusing for the story because the names are 100% different.The only person you made it easy to recognize was Kunzite, why not do that with the rest of them?

Good start, I look forward to the rest of it. _
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