FUNNY!

nice fic.

Oh my god!! You gotta continue this!! It's great!! I love LaserQuest, so this is easy for me to follow...except I never play teams...hehehehe...mercenary hunter...=^_^=!!

Hey, Ryoken, it's me! You know the character I sent? Could you make her incredibly appealing and attractive to Kurama? Physically, and in personality? PLEASE?^-^ That would be great if you did, and this fic is so funny! I can just imagine Hiei in laser tag! ^.^

Hey, Ryoken! Ch. 1 is so funny! Do you mind if I send in a character? Mine is tall, with deep black hair that has blood red streaks in it. She is smart, and has jet black eyes that gleam gold when she's angry. I want to be on Yellow team, and she is named Mirouto. (don't know if that means anything...^-^')

Nice. Very nice. I LOVE HIEI! Thank you.

*sniffle sniffle* YAY IM IN UR STORY IM SO HAPPY! THANKS $ PUTTING ME IN UR STORY!

I really enjoyed your story. i thought it was awsome! I want to be in it to. I want my character to have medium black hair with neon green highlights, green eyes. Wearing a red hurley t-shirt with black long sleeves underneath. Black jeans with long chains on the left side and right side on belt loops. wearing skateboarding DC shoes. ears are pierced three times on both ears. and i have biker gloves.
P.S.-i wanna be on admiral's team.

Hey! thanx 4 putting me in! are these characters u added this chap. still going to be in there? i hope so... coz i wanna shoot Yusuke! well i guess thats kind of impossible really but it's ok to wish ... right? well i liked it really well! later! update soon!
Admiral~

heh heh me again...i forgot some things for my character...heh heh...

yeah, anyway,i forgot to add that she's 14 yrs old, as quiet as kurama (^_^), and she has 13/20 vision...and (let's see, what else am i...)...uh...oh yeah, she wears a kitty necklace and butterfly mood earrings (don't ask)...she's kinda slow but has perfect aim...and her nickname (if you bother to give her one) is Neko

ok, NOW i think i'm done...lol ok sayonara

so we can make up characters for you?

ok, have someone (on kurama's team ^_^) named Serina (a girl) who has thick black hair down to her waist (but it's kept in a ponytail). and she should have lightish-blue eyes, and she should be wearing dark blue clothes...and she should be an experienced laser-tag player...

i'm so specific ^_^...but i'm done now (lucky for you)...cool story!

The fan fic was cool. But heres my character. AGE: 13

NAME: Korinou Hariachi

GENDER: Male

DESCRIPTION: 5 feet 3 inches quiet and calm like Hiei. Wears black and dark clothes. Black, spikey hair with a little bit of blonde on top. Eyes are navy blue and sometimes change color.He also has a Jagan eye so he can control fire. Usually carries a very long katana or nodachi.Likes to train, fight, and build his spirit energy.

ABILITIES: Some of hiei's attacks like the dragon of the darkness flame. He can create daggers of ice ( has ice powers) to throw at his enemies.Speed attacks, and little (very little) bombs of spirit energy to use on his enemies.

OH!! I.MUST.BE.IN.THIS.FIC!
NAME: REI KAZAMA
AGE:16
DESCRIPTION: LONG,SILKY DEATH BLACK HAIR, VIOLET EYES, PALE SKIN, IS WEARING BLACK SHIRT W/ GRAY LONGSLEEVED SHIRT UNDER IT, BLACK JEANS W/ A CHAIN AND SKATEBOARDING SHOES AND TRIPLE-PIERCED EARS. IS A FIRE AND THUDER DEMON WHO IS A SKILLED SWORDSWOMAN(HUH? DOES THAT WORD EVEN EXSIST?) AND HAS PSYCIC POWERS. MUST BE ON HIEI'S TEAM! HIEI ROCKS!
~WARRIOR OF CHAOS

That was really good so far! A description of my character, huh? I guess that means me... hmm... well, long dark brown hair (almost black), green eyes, slightly insane and evil (heehee...), and I LOVE KURAMA. ^__^ That good enough? Oh well, update soon!
~Keaira~

COOL! so we can come up w/ a character to be in this story?!? AWSOME! sorry *smiles goofy* okay well ... long black hair w/ purple highlights. navy blue eyes & black jeans & ruby red shirt. if ya need a name.. keep Admiral. I like your story! i think it's kind of funny & enjoyable to read! later!
Admiral~