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| Akili-chan 2004-03-27 ch 8, | abuseThis storys really good, but nothing really seems to be effected. Or is that going to happen later on in the story? Other then that, I like it. |
| pikinanou 2004-03-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseoh my gowd! a new chapie! well i liked it even if it was short. Keep going and may the brocoli be with you! |
| Akili-chan 2003-08-15 ch 3, | abuseI love this story, please go on. |
| Covin 2003-08-12 ch 4, | abuseYou know what you should do is have Kerro, in some way, be connected to Dr. X...a major plot twist that would make her the real enemy or something...rewrite chapter 4 into a real chapter and make it into a really big fic. It has a lot of potential, you should really do something with this. |
| Sonar 2003-08-04 ch 4, | abuseOh heya. I decided to go and sign in for once. Horrah, lol! I am reading Lance storm commentaries and fanfiction and saw yours. My god, I love this chapter. I want to see what happens next. And please, check out my stories and please give me a honest opinion. If you see any reviews by me in my story, I was encouraging myself seriously. |
| seyi 2003-07-09 ch 4, anon. | abusethis was weird. couldn't understand a word. i loved it! please update! SOON! |
| SuperNova 2003-06-26 ch 4, | abuseYes! Go Kerro, go Kerro. More soon? |