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Reviews For: Affecting the Future

Akili-chan
2004-03-27
ch 8,
abuseThis storys really good, but nothing really seems to be effected. Or is that going to happen later on in the story? Other then that, I like it.
pikinanou
2004-03-08
ch 7, anon.
abuseoh my gowd! a new chapie! well i liked it even if it was short.
Keep going and may the brocoli be with you!
Akili-chan
2003-08-15
ch 3,
abuseI love this story, please go on.
Covin
2003-08-12
ch 4,
abuseYou know what you should do is have Kerro, in some way, be connected to Dr. X...a major plot twist that would make her the real enemy or something...rewrite chapter 4 into a real chapter and make it into a really big fic. It has a lot of potential, you should really do something with this.
Sonar
2003-08-04
ch 4,
abuseOh heya. I decided to go and sign in for once. Horrah, lol! I am reading Lance storm commentaries and fanfiction and saw yours. My god, I love this chapter. I want to see what happens next. And please, check out my stories and please give me a honest opinion. If you see any reviews by me in my story, I was encouraging myself seriously.
seyi
2003-07-09
ch 4, anon.
abusethis was weird. couldn't understand a word.

i loved it! please update! SOON!
SuperNova
2003-06-26
ch 4,
abuseYes! Go Kerro, go Kerro.
More soon?
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