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| Stormchilde 2005-12-29 ch 5,  | abuseWOW! The journal idea was a great way to tell the story. Kris was not my favorite of the angels but you did a great job of fleshing out her life and turning her into a real person. |
| Supermicro 2005-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story completely is a bunch of fucking crap. It never happened on the tv show. As least my script had a little twist to it from a real episode |
| kalas 2005-02-02 ch 5, | abuseI like the idea of a running journal for Kris. That's pretty cool! |
| Emma 2004-10-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseVery good story! I love it! I like the way she is telling the story about her life. |
| Claripup 2004-05-22 ch 5, | abuseWOW - I dunno what to say... I LOVE this |
| imagine6 2003-10-30 ch 4, | abuseOh at last! I love it Mary Rose. The whole diary thing really works. Cool to see you make Kris' character somewhat real instead of a third angel with no real story behind her. Keep going. |
| imagine6 2003-08-20 ch 3, | abuseSo you have to keep doing these diary entries. I think they are a very creative way to archive episodes. I keep saying "Oh yeah...I remember that episode!" Very unique idea. |
| AP Especially 2003-07-28 ch 2, | abuse(Finally got around to reading it!) As I said earlier, I love the whole idea of first-person character development. You have Kris down to a T. However, I would like to see a lot more details. Maybe Kris could tell us some stories about how she always looked up to Jill. Or maybe even times when that wasn't true... |
| Krystina 2003-07-26 ch 2, | abuseGreat story so far. I really like how you've taken everything from Kris's perspective. I hope you plan to go through all of the scenes eventually. I'd love to read more. |
| Rena 2003-07-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is very good. It was very well written, and descriptive, which is excellant. Will there be more? |
| Anne 2003-07-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is great. I love anything that involves Kris, She was always my favorite Angel. Please write more. I love the episode recaps. :) |
| Duke Jr 2003-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseKris's Diary. Great concept Mary Rose. I like it. I'm not sure I understand about Jill not being a P.I., though. |
| AP Especially 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! I was considering doing a story like that myself. (Still working on my other one, though!) I love the idea of developing characters' pasts. You do it well, too, so I'm hoping you continue. (P.S. I know who the woman in the cell is!) |
| Yank2324 2003-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story I hope you continue it Interesting to see Kris' point of view |
| Pao 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat start Mary Rose, cause I'm sure you're gonna continue, right? *grins* I like knowing what Kris is thinking, and I'd love to see it continue! Please write more?? :) We need more Kris fiction here! :) |