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| Shakia 2004-10-13 ch 10, | abuseIt was a great story, but I don't think the crew would just not tell Harper he was in that caotic state. If he was and didn't know about it it'd seriously come back and bite him in the butt. Anyways, that's the only part I really had a problem with; the rest was great ^^ |
| Rommies voice 2003-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAn inresting start im keen to seen where this is going so im on to the next part. |
| MaryRose 2003-07-30 ch 10, | abuseI liked it. |
| Live-Love-Learn 2003-07-24 ch 10, | abuse*Gives LittleRedHead some Sparky Cola* There there! You can update now right? Pwease! UPDATE! |
| Iara 2003-07-15 ch 10, | abuseThis is so cute. I feel so bad for Harper though. This is an amazing story. |
| April 2003-07-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseDUN, DUN, DUN! But is he recovering? I have a feeling that he isn't... Keep going, this is great! Harper's my fave character. BRAVO! |
| Live-Love-Learn 2003-07-12 ch 9, | abusewow gREAT!ope to read more soon! *wink*...*nudge*...U gunna update now?? Want some cookies? Maybe some cheese?? Anything you want! |
| Karola 2003-07-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseI really like your new chapters and thanks that you write so fast. |
| Iara 2003-07-08 ch 7, | abuseThis was a great chapter! I loved it. *-* |
| Harpers_Gal22 2003-07-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou have to keep going! Evil cliffhanger. EVIL I TELL YOU! *shows up at Julia's house* You are going to write more? RIGHT!??!?!?!??! U better. Luving reader, Ellysa |
| parisindy 2003-07-07 ch 7, | abusecool story ...looking forward to more! |
| gotmilk 2003-07-05 ch 6, | abuse"Oh, I love to go swimming with bowlegged women..." That's hilarious. *snickers* Love the story so far. Can't wait for more! :D |
| Iara 2003-07-04 ch 6, | abusePoor Harper! I feel so bad for him! But I can't wait for more! |
| Karola 2003-07-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseKeep on writing! But I have one question: Did they turn Harper away so that he didn't have to watch the film again? Although he isn't responding his eyes are open. He could wake up any minute and it would be really cruel if that would be the first thing he sees. |
| Karola 2003-07-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseNow that's a horrible past if I've ever read one! (I hope that's the right English.) So please go on! I'm waiting. |