Aww such a happy story 3 I,m currently writing a very interesting fic I'm taking characters from loveless and putting them in Descendants of darkness! It should be interesting (I'm a Muraki fan)

love the story so far!

I understand exactly how Tsuzuki Asato would feel. "Shut up! Go away! No body cares! You're annoying! We all wish you'd go off somewhere and die for all we care!" I've gotten this what seems to me like all my life. People are cruel. However, now, every single time I've considered harming myself, or even so much as suicide, I consider. 'Hey. I could be all the way in the country where my belly is sticking out, but not because I eat a lot. More like because it's filled with worms because of being starved to death. Also, I realize that I'm one of the lucky people. I have family and friends who adore me. The school staff and those at church adore me. People live lives with no love. I haven't been raped. People have been raped. I haven't been tortured in any way. People have been tortured. People have often been treated so badly by the opposite sex. A lot of times betrayal and abuse in many ways is the cause for homosexuality and bisexuality and lesbian. It's difficult to trust anyone with a severely wounded heart. This may not always be the case, but this may be the case most of the time. My eyes open up. I'm no longer the blind person. I see. I feel. I realize. Hey. It's someone who loves to make someone cry in front of everyone. It's someone who loves to embarrass someone in front of everyone. It's someone who has fallen and crashed down upon the earth. I'm the bird who soars in the heavens high above. I reach for those who've fallen and I try to help, but I'm shoved away. Instead, those who've fallen aim the gun at me and try to shoot me down to where they are. I run for my life. Basically, it's like I run for the sake not to forget once more who I am.

Tsuzuki Asato is my result for the Which Yami no Matsuei Character Are You? quiz.

By the way, I hate it when I'm treated like a child. I get irritated. I don't like it when people treat those I love like dirt. I don't like it when people get in my way when I'm merely going about my business and following the rules. I don't like it when people mess with me when I'm trying to sleep and when I don't feel well and some other things. I don't like it when I'm left in charge of things. People don't listen to me, it seems. I struggle with that a lot.

This story reminds me a lot of myself and Tsuzuki Asato. I like it. It's so tragic, though. I understand exactly the fact that I don't want to ruin my dreams over depression issues. I was told that I'd end up in a hospital if I didn't stop.

Hikari Maiden is who I am. Not to be changed. I refuse. I get irritated if anyone dares to get me to change that.

If you're ever bullied, go and read my fan fiction called 'Breathe' and the other one I've created. However, I think 'Breathe' is the better of the two.

Hey. Note that you're not alone. There are others out here. Remember that one. I mean, I'm a creative writer. Think about it. A creative writer. Would you ever consider that fact? I'm bullied.

I know this is an old story, but seriously, that was fantastic! You made me cry and grin like an idiot too . Wonderful work love!

Lovely characterisation! You've done very well. I don't mind it's AU, it even made it more interesting. The last chapter was simply perfect!

Keep on writing!

I really enjoyed reading this, it was very well done. Some parts were a little unclear, but they started making sense after awhile. All in all, a very good read, *favs* _

All in all, a very well-written and thought out story. You did fantastically on the characterizations and most of the grammar. Only problem I had was that I'm not a fan of Muraki. XD He's evil, he will always be evil (although I understand that his being evil is really the fault of his brother or whatever...) and I'm kinda glad he died. Only reason I wasn't upset that YnM didn't kill him was that it left it open for fantastic fanfic authors like you! Thank you for spending the time and effort to put out this story, I'm sure I'll be back to read it a couple more times. :D

TDG/MK

I loved to read this fic. It's great!

Congratulations!

aw!omg that was such a great story! I LOVE IT! THE CUTENESS IN THE END, THE ANGST, DRAMA, SEXUAL ADVANCES..lol I LOVE IT ITS THE BEST! I RATE IT 100 out of 10! THATS HOW WONDERFUL IT IS! i luv the hisoka and tsuzuki pairing in this

Wow...just...wow. I mean...WOW! Heh, articulate aren't I? Well, either way, this is one of the most fantastic fanfics I have ever read. A few gramatical mistakes, but nothing to deter me. I was sucked in the moment I started reading it and I just could not stop. Fantastic job. *goes to see what else you've written*

W O W ! I read this first at KatCom's, and was really moved back then :D I like your style in general and especially in this one, since it's so straightforward and functioning, though it's an AU. You had great ways of bringing in the anime/manga canon, for example the fire-scene at the hospital's backyard. Just admirable. I couldn't concentrate on my school studies for three days after reading this, I was just musing over TsuSoka with drool on my chin x3

And then, would you mind if I'd draw (or at least try to ;D) this fic of yours? This would be quite ideal to a 'basetext' of a doujinshi since it's based on the plot, and that's one reason I got so thrilled about this idea :D (and since I like this fic very much).

my fave fic! it made me cry and everything but it is lovely! thanks for writing it *hearts*

Ayumu: OH. MY. GOD. O_O

Sakura: Uh? What he said.

Ayumu: Awsome fic but NO HISOKA!

Sakura: You're not gonna kill him are you? You can't. I mean it's Hisoka. And Muraki's a bastard.

Ayumu: ...(went into shock)

Sakura: I bet you're thinking: Click the damn forward button you dumbasses! Right? Yeah. *clicks the forward button*

Beautiful. I feel bad I only read this now. I should have read this before! Lovely work. XD

This was just incredible to read, you gave me quite an experience by giving me the privilege to read your story. It's hands down the most intelligently written YnM story I have ever read. I especially enjoyed the depth you gave to all the characters while still keeping them...in character. Thank you so much for a great fic. I sincerely look forward to reading more of them.