started your skyehawk one !! it's interesting noticing all the chances .. and i do notice, because i've read your old one a couple of times

new one's nicer !!

of course I cry more that Harry wakes up than when he died. i am so ** up. This was an awesome story and I'm so glad that you wrote it.
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have you made a sequal like the cancer returns or sumin if you have watts it called
its brill xx
MAKE A SEQUAL NOW

brilliant! Now I can finally go to bed as it's 3am

I know what you mean about the Celebony will die comments etc...

I got loads of flack in one of my stories when I had Harry sorted into Hufflepuff and Hermione into Slytherin (even though that later turned out to be a red herring).

Whatever language you want to write the narrative in is fine, but when characters are speaking, you should remember that they aren't American.
movie (US) = film (UK)
movie theater (US) = cinema (UK)

For a while I worked in a callcenter, you know, where rich companies outsource their customer service calls to a poorer country where they can pay a pittance (less than 1/6 of the US rate when the cost of living was about 1/2 that of the US) and ignore health and safety rules.
About a third of our pay was in bonuses, calculated on things like how fast we could deal with each call - this is why callcenter staff never want to take time to help you, they lose their pay if they do. As I'm English, loads of callers just wanted to chat all day "cause I just LOVE your accent!" Drove me mad!

nice chapter. Now I have to stop reading. It's 3:25am! Bed beckons

I honestly can't see Madam Pomfrey not checking him out properly if he's been bringing up blood. A simple scan would show the broken ribs and probably other injuries too.

Talking of injuries, why didn't the Stensons take photos of his injuries before and take harry to Social Services office to show them when it was obvious that Social Services were going to do nothing? They could easily have gone to the press. Incidentally no judge is allowed to take part in a case where he knows any person involved. He'd be disbarred.

Apart from various blood cancers (which Stenson doesn't have the symptoms for), there is no blood test for cancer as you've described it.

How did a Muggle girl who doesn't know about the magical world give a letter to Hedwig?
Also cancer treatment ISN'T expensive, it's FREE. We have the National Health Service in the UK.
You mention the new version of this story, but if it isn't complete, it's probably better to read the old one on , right?

Hey, I had the same thing happen to me! I was in math class and we were watching this movie. I was banging my pencil on the desk and when i did it again, i missed the desk and stabbed myself in the leg. I now have a piece of lead in my leg. It really doesn't hurt. I love the fic. Have to read the rest but found that tidbit interesting.

Like it so far. Can't wait for the rest. Please update soon.

Hey! I just read this thing in one sitting, and I just couldn't stop. I have to admit, you made me cry twice. Ron's reactions to things just got me. Loved the way you wrote him, and Hermione too. You know, I almost tracked you down once Harry died. But you saved yourself from a long and gruesome death at the end. Lucky you. Anyways, thank you so much for writing! I really enjoyed every bit of this lovely fic.

I stumbled upon this fanfic and I'm so happy I did. I loved it, so perfect, by far one of the best stories on this site! Thank you!