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Mashida 6/26/03 . chapter 2
That was so incredibly funny. When you depicted Riku as a girl in the bigining of the story, I thought you just wanted to change it to your liking, but know I know you actually did, only in a different way than I thouht. Anyway, I like your writing. It's way better than mine. But if you would be so kind (drops to knees ands beggs) PLEAZ REVIEW MY STORY, PLEAZ! Anyway, hop to read more.

Ja!

Da-chan
bonesy 6/26/03 . chapter 2
woah! i loves it, update soon, i LOVED the end twist!

-lucky
shinigami 6/26/03 . chapter 2
A COULDN'T U HAVE DONE SOM MORE THAT WAS SO KEWL
Ash Lee Brodford 6/26/03 . chapter 2
this is so good! poor sora! he must be so confused! but he still has a chance at love! he just needs to get over the whole guy thing! but he should go for it! update soon!

Ja ne!

Ash Lee
Boogie Monster's Ball 6/26/03 . chapter 2
funny funny. tee hee good story i want more lots more
Ko-chan to Ya-chan 6/26/03 . chapter 2
*laughs her ass off* XD Poor Sora. . .

*wipes away a tear* Oh my Ra. . . Great one, Riku! Talk about a prank. . . ; Of course, he didn't really mean for it to be one, did he? Oh well. . .

THIS IS GREAT! I LOVE IT! _ If you weren't already on my faves list, I'd have to put you up there again! XP I'm serious- this is really good. Please continue when you can! I can't wait for more!

Ja ne! _
Myst4drgn 6/26/03 . chapter 2
REally Original! Update soon!
Maho Kiwi 6/26/03 . chapter 2
...he...

What a wonderful story. While it took me a moment to adjust to the idea of Riku being a girl, the little hints you put in, like Riku only smiling when Sora called him girly (and the m/m disclaim of course), kinda tipped me off. Very humorous. My favorite images were of short little "girl" riku trying to protect sora, and at the very end, were Riku chides Sora for dropping his stuff. Just like old times. You have such a lovely writing style, you make the emotions of your characters so real.When they are sad, the reader is sad, when the make a fool out of themselves, the reader feels embarrassed for them. I love you. I hadn't felt like reading anything for so long now (looks forlornly at the 2 novels sitting unread on her shelf and the pile of "new chapter" notices from Fnet in her inbox) but You reviewed my new POS (yes, yes it is) so I felt I should read your new story too. It makes me happy. I want to go for a walk in the sunlight, I want to sing,I want to...to...buy the world a puppy! Anxiously awaiting next chapter!

Meg
abii-chan 6/26/03 . chapter 2
XDD

This is really good, sushi-chan. I love the end-"Since when have you been a guy?" Ah, poor Sora. Oh, well, yaoi is fun! Write more! And if you need a beta-type person, you know my e-mail.

Now, write more. Now. *gnaws*
Jenni Kunoichi 6/26/03 . chapter 2
I am not sora lover, ok? I'm SONOSCA and she is my sister. I thought the story was GREAT! You should continue writing cause I liked it. You are good at this.

I was surprised when I thought Riku was a guy. OH MY GOD! * shocked at the thought * WOW! * back to reality * Well anyway, please continue!

Soon enough I'm going to be a writer for Kingdom hearts and I hope that you read it. Tell if I need to add something more to it. GREat STORY!

* smiling shyly * from: SONOSCA
Minerva Teller of tales 6/26/03 . chapter 2
I really like your fic. The story is original and different. the idea of Riku being helpless and girly as a child is completely new and then the way he's describe when Sora finally sees him, Oh delish! Can't wait for more.
theunknownpokeball 6/26/03 . chapter 2
Wow! just...Wow! I love how you write, and well just...WOW!
Chibi-chan v2.5 6/26/03 . chapter 2
XD This is great. Poor Sora though, damn Kairi. *hugs Sora* But I'm glad he's better now since his "girl" friend is back. *laugh* :)

Maybe I'll write a yaoi-hentai one-shot for Kingdom Hearts sometime. :p
Meia 6/26/03 . chapter 2
Pfaahaha. "Since when are you a GUY?" *cackle* I feel kind of sorry for Sora. The poor kid. Even if he's a bit of a dork, and such a teenager, he's still a poor kid.

I love Riku, for all the 3.5 seconds we see of him. He looks like he's going to be /great/. Albeit he's taking the Sora's you're-a-guy comment pretty calmly, unless he already knew that Sora thought he was a girl back then, which is all sorts of... really funny, actually.

I'm not sure how possible it is to be best friends with someone and not be certain of their gender, but I'm not going to nitpick because it's all just. so. funny. I love you so very much.
Abelle 6/26/03 . chapter 1
Okay, this is what happens when you don't read author's notes when it's right in front of your face the whole time. *grins sheepishly* Turns out you did know about the manga all this time.

By the way, I did say this story's really cool, didn't I? XD
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