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| RLBB 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseaw. That was short and sweet I liked it. |
| Heini 2005-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseIhana. Greg on sankarini. Jotenkin lauserakenteistasi näki, että olet suomalainen. Älä kysy, miten. Olin vain kovin tyytyväinen, kun luin profiiliasi ja huomasin olleeni oikeassa. Tämä oli nyt tällainen yleinen "jatka hyvää työtä"-viesti. Pidän tyylistäsi. Jos jotain rakentavaakin palautetta vielä... Loppu oli vähän cliché. Tai ainakin vähän töksähtävä. Ja tapa, jolla kutsut Gregiä nimeltä vast kolmannessa kappaleessa, on vähän kummallinen (se tulee vähän yllättäen, kun ensin puhutaan pelkästä miehestä, ja sitten yhtäkkiä Gregistä, mutta en ainakaan tähän hätään kyllä keksisi mitään parempaakaan tapaa valmistaa lukijaa). Mutta niin. Hyvää työtä. |
| aograv 2004-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell written :D I love the fluff ::hugs the fluff:: |
| goldenone 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abuseNever thought of Greg as a dancer, but it kinda fits, you know? Great fic, I liked it. If this is horrible, I have to go read your other stories! |
| csifan1 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is bloody freakin' great. email: lbr30@juno.com fanfic name: csifan1 story title: Rooftop Philosophy by Elina |
| Henrika 2003-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHow profound. I think that Greg is more deep than eveyone gives him credit for. Keep writing! |
| scatteredbrains 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseGREAT story! LOL! cute Greg! but aren't u gonna update ur story "Time's a wastin'"? i mean, i wanna know wat happens to Greg! plz update that story VERY soon! =D |
| Duckie24 2003-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAWW! I LOVED this! Don't say it's the end! Keep going! Keep up the FABULOUS work and post more Greg/Sara SOON! |
| Tabby X 2003-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was SO sweet! Heehee, I have a god complex too. ^_~ Comes with writing. So, this most certainly isn't "out of character" or whatever. It's a very cute fic, and it could be one of those little character-to-character heart-to-heart things the powers that be sometimes toss in at the end of the episodes. I liked it! |
| LynnM 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseFantastic! The characterization in the story is really well done. Thanks for writing. |
| Belle Walker 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was sweet... Maybe you could make Grissom dance with Sara on a rooftop too... |
| MissyDaMutantCat 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abusei lve it but im a gregs a cutie person i want him lol hes mine lol but still good fic! |
| annie 2003-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's cute, i like it. it has a cute feel without being overly gushy. good story |
| lenny 2003-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so cute! i love greg/sara friendship pieces. good work. |
| MissyJane 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! |