NO! You must go on! Please, I'm begging you. More pain, more torture! Please, don't just stop here. I have to have more. I love it when people write and have Duo like this. It's a nice change. Please, I'm begging you to write a sequal.

your story rocked out loud - i love horror storyies and wufie with duo so this story was just what i was looking for i implour you to right more {get on knees and begs} pweasse!

Interesting. Very interesting. It's well written, though I would like to see more...

Well, keep up the good writing!

i won't kill you, i promise. You can trust me, can't you? Of course, thats what i thought. Youre not the only one who knows about

hell...hehehehehe, sorry, couldn't resist. i liked very much, i love wu and duo, and i love sadistic shit even more, guess cause i like that shit as well, don't tell, or i'll unleash my hell upon you!

bye

no, I won't kill you, don't you worry I really liked your story! there's only one thing I have to criticise: it was too short!

bye, Bengali

That was a very intruseing story.

This just an idea I have, you don't have to do.

It a sequel of what happen, Wufei slowly recover from Duo's play, he tries to keep Duo from hurting the others and he realies that there an old tradation among his clan that is a very server that never been done before. He thinks that it only fair to get back at Duo. "An eye for an eye"

Wow. Just. Fuc*ing. Wow.

so Wu-man dies?

Woah.

That's a good fic, there.

ME

That was really good I hope you do a sequeal.
Read ya later,
Siren of the Darknessflame

Thats so sad!Poor Fei! :( why did you have to hurt 'em? -_- thats so sad!

WHAT HAPPENED TO DUO GODI LOVE HIS HAPPY GO LUCKY SELF!

-.-

1. Duo is a goodguy.

2. While I like your angsty story, it should have been the other way around.

3. Duo is a goodguy.

4. Your grammar is a little off, and so is your spelling. May I suggest going over it again.

5. Duo is a goodguy.

6. You promised true pain, and I have yet to see none that no other story has held. It's not really that graphic at all, considering.

Well, that's all. The overall rating for your story is 6/10.

do a sequel, lady!

Nope, sorry, didn't work. I can't review for this. Er ... scenario is skilfully plotted ... descriptive writing is rather ornate (ever seen 'Vampire Hunter D'? Reminds me of the literary equivalent of that) ... characterisation is - Damn, you already know what I think of the characterisation!

No cheers this time, this is ... eep.

-Shella

*suppressing an insanely strong urge to slap Duo* I don't think I like him very much. Not at all. He's an idiotic incomparable bastard in this fic. He's fallen to a level lower than any of the Oz people he's supposed to be rebelling against. He's meant to be a freedom fighter, but he's worse than the people he's supposedly saving the colonies from. You don't see any of them (save for one exceedingly erasable General) torturing people for sexual pleasure. I think in this case I can excuse ambition better than I can excuse Duo's disgusting change.

Is it difficult for you to bastardise Duo like that? You keep going on about how much you adore him yet you can write this ... Cor. Toughie.

I'll try & do a full review for the Epilogue.

Cheers,

-Shella

Ep! That was...so scary! You definitely did a good job on making this a dark fic, no doubt about that. Duo and his drastic change, Wufei crumbling into utter despair, all very well written. Who wouldnèt crack when faced with someone like a dark Duo? (And no, Ièm not doing the funny "e" on purpose, I just donèt know how to fix it and get my apostrophies back. Gr...) Your descriptive writing was excellent in allowing the reader to know just what Wufei thought as soon as Duo walked in. It was very convincing. Great job, and donèt forget to update Sweet Revenge and Imaginary!