 TerraEpon 2003-06-26 . chapter 1That was a VERY refreshing story for FF.net. No "pairings", no over-characterizing, no real cliches, just a silly little story. :)
Your writing style is much better in this one too. To be honest, most of your stories read very oddly, but this one is ok. And I loved that concept of "A Takahashi" :P
-Joshua |