Good Fic.

First person stories don't sit well with me, but this one was okay. The fact that Sirius was presented with a choice, really allowed character depth to be shown. You really captured the conflict within Sirius.

What I did notice,however, was that near the start of the story, Sirius knows he's dead. When he is talking to James, though, his mindset changes entirely. I almost felt like the sight of James caused Sirius to go into a state of denial.

In closing: This work was well written, but, (if it wasn't intentional) try to keep the mindset of the characters the same. Unless of course it is a longer story in which the characters are supposed to grow.

Infection Rating: 82% (1%-worst 100%-best)

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HEy LaFee. Once again a good start to a story. Some things are worth waiting for. Lily Evans is smart. I like the fact that you decided to write a story away right now from the main HP characters. I'm interested. Hope to see an update soon but I can wait.

Oh my gosh...That is so sad and so well written!! Magnificent job! RIP sirius!

OMG, that was the best thing i have read in a long time.
Touching, My gran always used to say,
some things are worth waiting for.
I wonder if it is true?

This is an awesome story. I wouldn't be able to write something like this, because 1- I still can't bear to say or type *cough cough's* name, and 2- I don't have the talent. Great story, absolutely awesome.

~*~Lorelei the Waffle

Aww! I wonder what dream he had with Remus! Wonderful!

*sniff*

Although I am still in denial of Sirius dying, this was an awesome story. I'm sure you get compliments on your stories all the time, so I suppose I'll make a comment. I've read 3 of your other stories and when you say aloud it should be allowed. Not a big deal in the least, but I needed to find at least one thing that you could change! LOL. Please continue writing. Your stories are moving.

Wow, that brought tears to my eyes, the memories and such. That was absolutely great.

Oh, this is a great story! It made me really sad, but at the samre time happy because Sirius and James were together again. I don't know if there is a way to continue the story, but if there is then I'll be waiting to read it. You're going on my favorite authors and stories list!
Lotsa Love*
Jaime

*chucks a cookie at her head*

YOU MADE ME CRY!

*sniffles*

I'm going to put this on my favorites list and read it over and over again even though it'll never update. It was just so moving. Even thinking about it now makes me cry...

May he rest in peace...

Beautiful! SO beautiful! I've just read about Sirius' death and I was very sad before I read this, but the thought about him and Prongs reunited in this story lifted the sorrow a bit, so thanks for that!

~The Charmed One

phwar. again megs, you havent dissapointed me, and thankyou for giving that closure, it was very much needed. that was beautiful.
Amy

Gorgeous. Send it to J.K...just kidding but, like I always say, you do write well.

wow, great job!! I really really really hope it was that good for Sirius when he died. Padfoot and Prongs together again. Warm fuzzy feelings. This is the greatest consolation I can imagine, as I beleive I am grieving Sirius myself.
(Only thing is, I think Sirius would choose to communicate with Harry. So would James. Harry probably needs him even more than Remus does.)
Awesome!!