Reviews for Another Chance

Reviews For: Another Chance - Reviews: Page 1 of 31

Sacha Nava 2006-09-26 ch 51,	abuseFirst of all, I apologize about my english. I speak spanish but i can understend english languaje pretty well. I just wanna say that i like your history a lot, cause Aoshi and Megumi are my favorite couple, they just match so fine! I have to read this tipe of histories in english because I couldn't find one in my languaje. So, i want to ask you a favor. Can I translate your history to my natural languaje (spanish)? Because I like to people read about this exellent couple. I will respect your name as an author of this fic, I will only be the translator. I`ll mail you for your answer.
kunthea 2006-09-14 ch 51, anon.	abuseThis is a really nice story, though i feel you stretch it a little in the middle part. It’s well written. Your writing is greatly improved in this story. I mean, the first few chapters are simple and ok, but your writing became more intricate, more elegant and sophisticated in later chapters. I guess more like your other story, memory’s touch, which I’m half way through, by the way. Anyway, good.
Lucifer-the-great-undead 2006-08-29 ch 51,	abusewell i finally got myself to read this story before school starts. well first of all i am an aoshi/megumi shipper. you know when i was reading your author notes in the beginning to the middle of the story or so, you seemed unsure who megumi would end up with. you know as a reader, it seemed that you definitely leaned to aoshi pretty early. maybe u didn't realized this but i think it was clear who the guy would be. anyway great writing and plot. hm i wish there was a spin-off on misao and sojiro. the journey with them and cho would have been very amusing. great job and update memory's touch one of these days.
asga 2006-05-03 ch 51,	abuseBRAVO!! I love this story ^^ ill put at my fave
asga 2006-05-03 ch 50, anon.	abuseI read this story and made my eyes tired but who cares cose I hook with it ^^ adorable ficcie ^^ :D 1 chapter to go
Thief Rikku 2005-02-12 ch 51,	abuseHohoho... T_T BEAUTIFUL! I've never read such a well-written fic such as this! It feels like I'm reading a novel! Really... squints eyes I suppose I should give it a try and read some more Jane Austin... I'm just absolutely astonished at the professional and advanced writing you have! squeals I'm so happy that this ended in the most lovely way!! Y'know, I was quite concerned that this would turn out to be a Meg/Sano ficcy because of the struggles you've expressed in your author's note and stating how you'll probably make the decision based on the most number of supporters of one couple. And you know how many Meg/Sano fans are out there... @_@ Phewf wipes forehead KYAH! prances around Sorry I'm so hyper. But it took me a couple of days to finish reading this fanfic but it was all worth the burning redness of the eyes and all!! cries I'm quite sad though that this is finished. Lucky for me, there's the epilogue hehe, so I'm excited. Man, I wish I came across Meg/Aoshi pairing earlier so I could comment on each chapter. But if I did it know, then I know that you would be very annoyed at me. So many things to say but I know I must have forgotten more than half of it already now! >_< I really love your whole plot/storyline and how you organized and added in the cool twists. You're a very logical person! You do seem like a Aoshi type of person, being able to think things thoroughly with a lot of precise thought. You have a brilliant mind, that's all I can say. Honestly, it was kind of frustrating seeing Megumi tangled in the love triangle lol. I was kinda on the edge of my seat literally pulling on my hair, wondering when she's going to make her decision and choose! I'm very pleased that she chose Aoshi hehehe, but I do love Sano. I think that Meg and Sano have a cool friendship and they could work it out in a relationship but I'm all for Aoshi/Megumi. slumps onto the floor in a deep, overly-exaggerated bow haha, Sano's a pretty lucky guy hitting on Megumi before she went off to Aoshi. Poor Aoshi, really! I was really afraid that if Sagara kept on coming onto her, she would give in eventually but! Sano's a good guy for being considerate and letting Aoshi have the chance. After all, Aoshi is such a generous and kind gentleman! I was on the verge of tears when he told Sano to take Megumi and leave Kyoto in chapter 50.. T_T I was like, baka Aoshi! You being so sweet and magnanimous, you deserve a lot!! huggles Aoshi Okay, I'll be quiet now lol. I think I'm annoying my author buddy!! ~(^__^)~ eyes go twinkly A very beautiful moment he and Megumi shared! I really liked the way you described his feelings for her when they kissed! That description was PERFECT! FINALLY!! hehehe, they kissed! XDXD So all my reading did pay off eh? I liked it when you stated that Megumi was the one who chose Aoshi and not the puppet master heh heh. ^^ All's good. thumbs up I enjoyed reading this wonderful and superb fanfic! applauds, clapping madly Yayy! Magnificent job, one of the best fanfics I've ever read! showers you with pocky and confetti Now I must take my leave for now, but I'll make sure to read the epilogue and comment on that one and hopefully for you, I won't make a long letter out of it sweat drops hugs the fanfic Love this so much!
weirdtaste 2004-12-11 ch 50,	abusearen't they in the hallway? as in like with the oniwaban in the next room? so that means that it is most likely that their conversation could have been heard by almost everyone, right? including okina. knowing him, he couldn't have gone very far with meg-chan. argh! so bummed that the fic has ended. oh well, i should be glad that it's a happy ending 4 both aoshi and megumi.
Larissa Hyuga 2004-11-04 ch 50, anon.	abusewhoa! i am about to end, just hanging cause i dont wanna end... its so good! the scene where they embrace and everything is so cute! and i melt everytime Aoshi says his feelings for her. oh, forgot to mention it touched me so when Aoshi was thinking about the okashira title belonging now to Misao... it was pretty sensitive that part... and there is a wedding coming... lalalala!
Larissa Hyuga 2004-11-03 ch 46,	abuseok, shame on me for only reading this now. i printed the whole story, including aside from chance and i am so in love with it. the last chapter i read was the one with the wedding and it was so good. you write so well i could not keep up feeling on the clouds when aoshi invited meg to go to kyoto... and i have the feeling this wedding will be turned into a real one soon. happy happy!
reves 2004-10-28 ch 51,	abusehello! First off you have an amazing fic on your hands. The plot twists kept me hooked from start to finish (which is pretty commendable considering the length of your fic)not to mention the love triangle you had going on there... Whew. Well needless to say, I read it all in one sitting. It took me more than 7 hours (lack of sleep is killing me) but I did it! Now for my imput... I am a S/M fan by nature, so when I first started reading this fic, I was all for an s/m ending. However, I thought it was sort of obvious that I wasn't going to get my wish -_-;;. Call me crazy, but it was the fact that Sanosuke got the first kiss that told me so. And plus, the way you portrayed aoshi in this fic, i think, make him a much better match for meg. In addition to that aoshi was getting the much more subtle yet meaningful hints while Sano was getting the more blattant and well...not so meaningful ones. It meant that Aoshi was the underdog, and the triumph of an underdog makes a great story ^_^. Not to say that I was disapointed! Not one bit. I really liked how this story turned out. In fact, I would have been disapointed (not to mention utterly confused) had it gone the other way. Plus I really liked the way you gave Sano some dignity in the end ^_^ I think it helped me as much as it did him. :D So! GREAT story (do I really need to say that again?) and wow, are your characters accurate! Considering the circumstances they were in, it was completely believable from start to finish. Through out the story you kept mentioning that one fan-base (either the A/Ms or the S/Ms) was showing much more support than the other. I foolishly assumed it was the Sanosuke and Megumi fanbase, but wow was I wrong! I for one had no idea they had so many fans... And thanks in part to this story, they might have a new fan joining them soon ^_~. yours truly, -reves
ak0 2004-07-27 ch 51,	abuseThat was great. Took a few hours of reading, scratch that... a few days, but it was well worth it. You covered everything. Haha. That was awesome. Romance, action, humor, mystery, angst... That's so neat that you did that, because anyone can relate to certain points of the story. Sorry, I didn't review for all chapters. I'm kind of late. Since it's already finished, but I couldn't go without praising your work at least once. Just recently I started to read Megumi-Aoshi stories and it's good stories that make me like the pair more. But then there's the Sano-Meg pairing. I like that too. Especially the good stories that go with it. Then I'm not sure which to side with, but I go more for Aoshi-Meg...especially since their looks go well together, but then Sano and Meg arguments are humorous, but so are Aoshi and Meg's, since she has to be a bit more witty around him sigh Great work applauds
MiraiGurl 2004-07-01 ch 51,	abuseThis was such an awsome ficcy!! I LOVED IT!! Usually, I tend to read mor of the Sano/Megumi fics, but I saw this on your Aoshi/Megumi shrine, and i thnough, why not give this pairing a try. Wonderful job! You and your story are going on my favorites lists, and i checking the recomending thing. =') Always, MiraiGurl
Strife3 2004-06-20 ch 51,	abuseOne of the best stories on fanfiction.net.
Leila Winters 2004-05-20 ch 51,	abuse'bout time that I reviewed this mother, huh? ^_^ That makes 450. I like being the one that makes the reviews nice and clean in numbers. :P It's so weird to go from the last chapter to this one...the other one ended on such a heady note, this is like culture shock! Lol... Hee hee...little Meggie is so cute! The only other person I can imagine giving Aoshi a flower without looking foolish is Misao...and even her, you can't help but think, "That's so sad..." ^o^ Thankies for an unofficial "most diligent fan" award!! Lol, you should see my stats page...the number of signed reviews tallied up is pretty sad...if I could measure my life in fics...cough Truly sad. Lol, it was very nice of you to acknowledge your reviewers in a formal thanks and you even took the time to offer honorary titles! Just goes to show how truly dedicated you are to the A/Meg fandom. :) Hahaha...thankies so much for posting deleted scenes! I love that when Meg and Aoshi establish some kind of confession, Okina butts in outside the door! That was beautiful. The hand!! "There were other things to fill silence." I love that line! Hmm...I'm trying to think of any overall fic comments since this will be the last review I will be able to submit (unless I cheat and don't sign in). This was a great story. From the beginning, one would never guess where it would have eventually led to. Let's see...a ship...a ball...kidnapping...drugs...a little girl...a surprise kiss...two surprise kisses...a fake death...a fake wedding...geisha houses...and poisoning. Did I cover it all? Quite an extensive storyline, that it is. ^_^ Anyway, congrats on a completed epic tale and I like that you've begun an illustrated version on your webpage. I can't wait to see what more you get done. ^o^ All right. That's all. THANKS SO MUCH FOR STICKING IT TO THE END! Until next time! Ciao!
Leila Winters 2004-05-13 ch 50,	abuseSorry I've been gone so long! I toldja I'd be back to finish reviewing, and here I am! ^_^ pathetic whimpering Aww, how sad! I love how Aoshi gets all selfless and chooses to let Meg go. "Take her." It's like he knows that if he doesn't get her, Sano will. :( Waah! "Anger, longing, bitterness...these were emotions he understood well." :D I love it! lol...poor Soujiro! Nuff said. Meggie-chan is SOO funny! ^_^ I love that she's so comfortable with Megumi and that they totally act like mother and daughter. And I love it when Okina gives Meg the kimono!! I'm such a sucker but it is TOO sweet! :D And then there's Meg's only wish for Aoshi to be happy...Mm...I love the sap! (Even though it don't come off as sap, but it's still so very sweet!) Hee hee hee...Aoshi checking her out in that kimono...nice. I like that very much. MAN! Their scene is INTENSE! I love the lines. "Does it displease you that I wear it?" "Is it for me to be pleased or not?" YUMMY! Their hot and heaviness is so great considering their usual curtness with each other. Mm... I just...lol...I don't know if I can go through their whole scene together and tell you everything that I loved about it. Mostly, the amazing tension that existed and was completely tangible to readers. The uncertainty with which the characers reacted to each other. Lips that were made for kissing each other. Lol. ^_^ Thankies for writing this! I know I still have one more chapter to go, but I'll have to save that one for later. For now, I hope this really lets you know that I'm ba~ack! :P Until later! Ciao!

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