I like the original twist you had on the end... very creative. Yeah, Harry can be a bit of a jerk some of the time (KayKay: Correction: ALL of the time!) like his father, James. Oh, are you/did you write a prequel to it? If you didn't I suggest you do; you already have some ideas in this story that suggest you did/will write one. Good job! (Oh, just so I can give some 'well rounded critique', I know that there was at least one place where you wrote you're instead of your so watch your homophones!)

are you going to put the year before for this story?

it's too confusing without it..

Wouldn’t that be funny, if we were all just characters in a book, and there was some greater force dictating everything we did and then publishing or posting it somewhere for other people to read?"

"You know," Hermione said, "I think that life is a book, at least philosophically. We all hold the pen to write the chapter that’s our life, but if it weren’t for everyone else around us, it wouldn’t turn out the same way. Even the slightest comment affects our lives, our story, like the comments a reader makes could affect a real story."

"Yeah, let’s slap on a little end page that says, ‘And they all lived happily ever after. The end." Madison said.

"Happily ever after?" Harry said. "Come on, that’s a Cinderella thing. Life is never perfect, which is okay because it doesn’t have to be. It would be pretty boring actually."

"Yes. It should be something realistic. And they all lived tolerantly ever after!" KayKay exclaimed.

Everyone laughed and chorused together, "The end!"

Haha. If only they knew..if only they knew.

::sigh::

Calli...I love you.

::clobbers her::

I haven't read a completely new fanfiction and finished it late at night knowing that I have stuff to do the next day in a long, long time.

Now, I'm off to read the 7th year because I cannot STAND being not-caught up.

MEGAN! MEGAN!

::gasps::

MEGAN! I was so surprised...and KayKay got through to her. YES!

::giggle in excitement::

I think this has got to be my FAVORITE CHAPTER!

BUMPS!

-Jessi

I was simply trying to make her feel less paranoid about relationships. Nothing wrong with telling a LITTLE WHITE LIE for that. She’s SO paranoid, and bratty, and she has that "I’m always right" attitude . . . she’s too into being independent—well, she got that, didn’t she?

Harry laughed to himself, pausing thoughtfully as he saw KayKay enter the Three Broomsticks.

Okay, so she’s pretty. I’ll give her that. If there’s any other part of her worth dating, I don’t know what it is.

UH! What is WRONG with him? DUH DUH DUH! What is WRONG WITH HIM!

::kicks imaginary Harry::

Do you know you're an awesome writer? A lot of writers aren't able to pull off the whole Harry not being perfect thing. I mean, they write about him being depressed and such but not Harry the Boy Who Lived being..MEAN! Hah. Who woulda THUNK?

::huggles::

Bumps.

-Jessi

Stupid, dumb, Harry.

Get over youself...you too KayKay. Hmph.

::crosses arms::

Too friggin stubborn...

::mutters::

Hehe. Sorry XP I'm giving reviews because you like them. I would like reviews too if I had an ff up here. Hey..I gotta finish my one-shot once i get my computer set back up. Hm. Better get on that.

So bumps!

-Jessi

"We always were like everyone else. Hey," Harry said when KayKay snorted, "why are you laughing?"

"Sorry Harry, but you’ve never been like everyone else. You’re always the ‘gallant hero’," she laughed harder.

Lmao. Forgot that lil fact diddntcha Harry?

::hugs self::

Bumps.

-Jessi

One could call him perfect. But he wasn’t.

Someone was better.

::smallest twinkle in my eye::

I wonder who that could be. Bwuahahahahaa. Lmao.

Bumps.

-Jessi

Heh. 10 more chappies to go. I think I'm going pretty quickly and getting into the ff. Hm.

Uber bumps. One thing I've noticed is that you are awesome at describing whats happening so I can actually PICTURE it in my mind. XD

-Jessi

Eh. I was too lazy to sign in XP

"I guess I must be wishing," she said to herself softly, "on someone else’s star."

Aw. Poor girl. Cheer up love.

Bumps.

-Jessi

I loved your book!

i like better than JK'S

HEY!

This is a great story! I was reading this on the Harry Potter Board then they got changed and i couldnt find you so i was wondering if you are or alreadly did repost this wonderful ff. Please tell me! i got two e-mails Shellygurly@ and twodots91@

great story

Okay, I know it's weird to review a middle-chapter of a a story that's already finished but...

*just read the dream thing*

Whoa.

hj,