I laughed, I almost cried, I got confused, and sometimes I smiled... IMO, any fic that gets me to do everything on my list above is worth finishing... Not to mention that this story has gathered a ton of fans. By all means, please update... (Now to log in... I know, I'm so lazy)


-Stormie :)

Is that the end, r u gonna update? PLEEZE UPDATE! I am in luv w/ this fic! SO wonderful! I knew u wouldn't make soujiro leave misao! It makes me so sad when people who have true love leave each other- so many people can't find true love, or haven't found it yet (like me! but i'm only 14 so that doesn't really count) or find the wrong person and have 2 break up or get un-married (like my parents) it's just so sad (by the way, i hate the word that starts with a D for getting un-married- it sounds so harsh... i'd rather just say un-married...) anyway, i'm glad soujiro realizes that misao is his one and only... hopefully he realizes, that is... :D
I think it's kinda weird that aoshi would try and kill soujiro when he knew he had changed just because someone told him 2- i mean, he's not a puppet! but still, that's OK... :)

U say Ciao a lot- i wuz wondering if u r italian... my cousin's half italian... she lived in italy for five years when she was little, but then she moved back here... Anyway, bootieful chappie- i luved it- u gave me what i asked 4 w/o meaning 2- aoshi is SUFFERING! problem is, now i just feel bad for him... where's my mean streak when i need it- I'm NOT supposed 2 care about aoshi- he's practically the BAD GUY! I'm confused. I'm confused about the other person i like besides aoshi, the REAL person. I'm not confused about this fic though- i know i luv it! :D

OK- an evil, cruel, kissie-wishie type of cliffhanger! arg! evil with a capital V, because that letter is the most uncommon letter in the word 'evil'... anyway, nevermind, that made no sense- it made negative (-) sense! Just ignore me! Just buy me some lemonade- just let me read this WONDERFUL FIC! I luv u. I luv ur fic. I love aoshi who will never be mine. I love someone else who is even less likely to be mine. But i won't cry.
Sorry... that wuz just too random. anyway, i'll review more later! :D

NOT much aoshi in this fic- i'd like 2 see him suffering 'cause he's lost his misao (because i am just SO incredily evil and cruel, and nasty, and just a bad person, so i want 2 see my darlin' aoshi suffer- right?) anyway, I just feel like aoshi has 2 have some sort of reaction- hopefully u'll fit that in at some point...
I can tell a kissy-wishy is comin'... luv is in the air! :D

very funny- I like it... Sano's little 'this is the oportunity 2 talk about her' line was hilarious... i've always liked sano... he's kinda insensitive, but he's funny and loud like me (not that i'm insensitive as far as i can tell) but he's kinda sweet at times... I've always thought Sano and misao should get together (that way I could have aoshi... that is MY EVIL PLAN!) (just kiddin'- *evil laughter*)
thanx 4 writing a Sou/Misao fic- they are really my faves! :D

wtf dude its been like a year since u last wrote this ficcie!!... hm, neh, neh,
by the wayy...i saw that ABOUT ANGST! I WILL NOT ALLOW IT!! (unless aoshi dies...*cackle*)

Are you Japanese? Because you frequently use Japanese phrases, which I think is cool, and some parts of your English grammar are a bit confusing to me... Still, I love your fanfiction! I am going to look at your profile after this, just to let you know.

beautiful and bittersweet
I wonder when the climax will come
:)

EP!
Good Chapter!
How will it end?
MORE?
PLEASE?

< Impashence

THAT WAS SO TOUCHING
GO U!

wow...YOU FINALLY UPDATED! *pouts* TT *whacks MiTa* took you LONG enough *sighs* Great chapter =D you better update soon or else!! *holds a baseball bat*

oh,this story is good
why don't update it more quicker?

*wailing* >.< Baby wanna to read more,baby might die if yah don't update soon.Help baby please!!;.;

Hi Mita-chan, long time no see, I hope you're still happy/healthy.
This chapter of yours is very emotional, almost made me cry, but I think it'll be better if you could stretch it out quite a bit. For such example:

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Then he found he could go no further. He had wanted to leave without seeing her again and keep the image of her leaning over the railing discussing the nature of the past and future with him as his eternal picture, but he found he couldn't. He had to see her one last time.

He crept up to her door quietly and he only peeped in when he had assured himself of her slow, regular breathing. She was all bundled up under a blanket and her left foot was sticking out from under the covers. The moonlight bathed her and made her seem silver and ethereal, as if she were already a memory. She stirred slightly and snuggled closer to something she held tight in her arms and as Soujiro studied it closer, he realized it was his gi. The moonlight was bright and Soujrio could pick out all the details of his gi, even the line of crooked stitches (He got the slash which Aoshi-sama gave in the Temple remember?). Her fingertips were covered with little pinpricks and Soujiro could see the ball of floss she'd used to mend it with near her foot. Her last act of care for him touched him so much that he wanted to gently take the gi from her arms and put it on. That way she'd at least know that a piece of her went with him, but he knew that if he ventured into the room that she would surely wake up and then he couldn’t leave. And he had to leave. He had to leave!

So he didn't creep close to her and he didn't retrieve his gi which she had so carefully stitched.

He simply whispered "Sayonara, I know your future will be beautiful,"

And as his words melted into the soft splashings of the rain on the window covering, Soujiro turned and walked away.
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There, don't you think that would be ok? I just think it out, but yours is not bad either. Could you just put more details to it and make the story more and more dramatic/romantic and thoughtful. That's all! And don't let Misao being a crybaby, she has to be strong, at least -for his sake in the future time.
Good bye and good luck!;)