 Hello-Lovely 2009-05-15 . chapter 4YOU. MY BEST FRIEND. FOR WRITING THIS. <3
They are kind of my Persona OTP of OTPs so seeing something like this was pure gold to me. Your characterization is so on that the development of their relationship seems really natural, and I love the exchanges you write for them, and my favorite chapter for this had to be "Deep". Ulala's vulnerability coming out slowly and Baofu wanting to protect her but being unable to show it? sakdvnsjaka That is love, that is fabulous.
The dialogue exchanges are perfect and IC and gosh you've made them so romantic here for what began as a kind of awkward one night stand thing, and I adore your fic for this and so many other things. This is perfect, thanks for making my night. Lolz, sorry for the gushing but this is how much I enjoyed it. It was a fantastic read. |
 Mysterious Loser 2009-01-19 . chapter 4It's been a while since I've seen this story, but I finally got the chance to sit down and reread it. It's still as awesome of a story as it was when I first read it.
I really like how you've written Baofu and Ulala and their relationship together. It gets me to thinking about what could happen next. LOL, it actually would be REALLY funny if she HAD gotten pregnant.
Anyway, I would love to see this story updated, though I know it's been a few years. :-D If it ever does, you'd make me the happiest person! |
 Seras Serenity 2008-08-11 . chapter 4I was so pleased to see some Baofu/Ulala fanfic, and a good one at that. I loved how each story built on the next. Great descriptions, and while I didn't completely feel Ulala in here, Baofu seemed to really spark.
What I liked: The line in the first chapter, something like, 'We had an unspoken agreement that it way okay to take things from each other.'
Also, the translation of Baofu's words, the difference between what he says, and what he means. That is such a man thing to do! I know it's been awhile since any updates, but I would enjoy reading more stories about these great characters :) |
 Shinra-Turk 2006-04-17 . chapter 4Excellent!! you capture the characters' personalities very well.
It was a joy to read. |
 Sasa 2005-06-08 . chapter 1 I really love this story, and I really hope that you can continue writing this^^ I'll be waiting patiently for your update. |
 skysenshi 2003-08-07 . chapter 4Wow, you pieced your vignettes together to make one story. It's a good thing I checked my favorite authors to see that you've updated. I hope to see more of your stories. ^_^ |
 BJ4 2003-07-23 . chapter 4This is really beautiful. I've always liked these two and I hope that you keep going with this story. I happened to get a chance to see this amzing fanart of Persona 2, done by a professional, I think, of Baofu and Ulala. It was so cute! It was of Baofu sitting on a sofa working on something while Ulala was stretched out on her stomach next to him drunk. The really cute thing was that he was so content to work with her laying by his side (he even kept one hand on her shoulder or something). I hope that this story is going in that direction. Baofu needs to stop beating himself up, ne? ^_^ Anyhoo, sorry about the digression. Fabulous story. The only thing I could say as comment is that I think Ulala seemed to be much stronger at the end of the game. She seemed like she was taking care of Baofu and she seemed to not feel inferior anymore.
Ah well, good characterization and writing their thoughts. I'll stop now before I ramble on and on and on...^_^ |
 Chaoslace 2003-06-28 . chapter 1Ahh, I love this sequence. I'm glad you've come back to visit it!
I still like 'Alive' the best... Your Baofu POV is completely flawless. His mind works on so many levels, and you got that subtlety across perfectly in his thought/dialogue pattern. I definitely envy your ease with the pairing; in my mine these stories could be canon. Keep it up!
Oh, P.S. I added you to my LJ friends too, but I used my alter identity instead of Chaoslace. If you see that a random person added you, it's probably me ;) |
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