THIS IS AN AWESOME FICTION! I really mean it! I don't see you quit writing this...it's so gosh darn funny! I nearly snorted my brains out laughing. Very, very, very good job.

very funny! i enjoyed it! when are you planning to update?

this is getting even more interesting...

I have never read a fic quite like this one before. I would have never expected anyone to write a comedic fanfiction using the villains of Oni. This is very interesting, very intriguing.

new chapter new chapter new chapter

PLEAASE!

I wondered when you were going to put a new chapter up. This one's very good.

Please update really fast,kay?bye!

hehe this is good i want to see more please update soon!

I had a strange dream last night.Mai was going to a comedy show.Guess who who the host was.(hint:hes are favorite evil maniacal crhysalite)If you guessed Muro,YOU'RE CORRECT!He said a little speech and then backed off the stage.1 of his grunts came out and tried to do atap dance.the problem was he kept smashng his same foot,over and over again.after a couple more smelling routines,Muro came out and showed his proformence.Making farting sounds with his armpits.

Mai:...(her eyes are about as round as dinner plates.and just as big.)

Muro:(is smiling like a doofus when i woke up.)

Poor Tim, I feel sorry for him. ;) (I'm a poet and I didn't even know it) ;D

That was kinda cool.

I really like the story so far.On Oni,I'm at Chapter10:Rooftops,but it took me quite a while to do that.It's hard.

Thanks for the encouragement. No, I'm not Richard Mattson, just Bobster. ;)

It looks pretty good so far. Keep it up...

You aren't Richard Mattson eh ?

Jez' checking.

hehe - Well this is quite interesting, I must say! I'm lookin forward to the next chapter... you should put some "hot n sexy" girls in for the guys... hehehe - that always adds a nice touch to a little fun, wouldn't you say? ) hehehe - YEA! ...anyway... get your next chapter up soon!

kai )