Nice one, tho I thought the last papragraph was a little abrupt, maybe you could lead into it a bit more? Other than that it was sweet well written and intriguing!

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That was pretty good, no real plot though. But thats all right, musings are cool!Thanks for reviewing my fic, although you were a little mean, it was my very first one ever. Oh well, I guess I need constructive critism. Its better than nothing ;P

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That was so good! I love your explanation of what Trance is and why she's on the Andromeda. Really really good. *g*

Wonderful story! Spock-LOL! Excellent writing. You're talented.

Why do I get the feeling that that little boy was Harper?

(You said 10 years ago and on Earth, and Harper is the youngest member of the crew and was born on Earth...)

This is interesting.

Wow! That's a really interesting idea! Pretty neat, and it explains everything about Trance! That's a cool story! I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Nice story. I always knew there was more to Trance that met the eye.

Wow, that was really good. I love reading different takes on Trance, I have my own, I'll post soon...I like yours better. LOL

very sweet! loved it!

It was weird, I don't think Trance kina has a thing for Dylan

I really enjoyed this story. Trance is one of my favourite characters because she's such an enigma. Your theory almost seems to suit her... I always get the feeling that there is more to her than meets the eye. Not sure I agree with the Dylan attraction (I've always favoured her liking Harper) but an excellent take on things nonetheless. Great job.

A great beginning. Could there be more coming in the near future? Will keep watching.

Hmm. Trance as a covert operationist? I think that this is certainly an INTERESTING idea, especially because you can make up whatever you want on her at the moment and not have anything from the show contradict you. I'm glad you took this to the next level; if you look at my fic (shameless plug, I think!) I just left Trance's background unfinished, for the reader to determine. Keep going, it has good, if not great, potential.

I don't know if I can see Trance as a genie, but maybe it's just my own perspective of her clouding my judgement. Nice story though and an interesting look at who she may be and why she's on Andromeda. Thanks for a story which was worth reading.