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| Meghan BRix 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis good why don't you right more |
| Mysterious Dark Eyed Wander... 2002-08-02 ch 1,  | abuseHey! Is that it? There's gotta be more! What did she dream bout and what happens on her night ride? Promise to email me when you write the next chapter k? |
| catra44 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abuseA few grammar mistakes. Are you going to finish or is that all. |
| tina 2001-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is great. Is her dream going to come true? What happens. |
| Erin Gem 2001-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI'd love it if you would elaborate (sp?) some more about her dream, and maybe where it came from. Great story! |
| maddy 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseTOO SHORT! |
| Plagerised Dreaming 2001-03-30 ch 1, | abusewow, that was... wonderful. very detailed! excellent work. but too short! i want more! :-) |
| Casey 2001-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a little short like you said... It seems to have started out well though. I think you need some more descriptions, more feeling in it. (tell more about how Bandit looks i.e. his soft black nose muzzeled her affectionatly. She sighs and moves back and he blows his warm breath at her. Her senses fill with the smell of hay and the sweetness of his grain. Something like that) |
| pumpkin937 2000-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it but please add more. |
| bubblestk 2000-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood=) Trisha* |
| Kelly 2000-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi, i liked your story. are you going to continue it? i'd like to read more. |
| Shine2 2000-12-16 ch 1, | abuseCool!! It is short, are you going to write anymore? I think you should!! |
| Soulfire Stories 2000-12-14 ch 1, | abusegreat story... liked it |